Reading in this happy class is a thing of kind of happiness, we are round not smooth Qiu Tian gets the sugarcoated haws on a stick with crooked be bored with, and the teacher is string that our autograph. - - preface
在这个快乐的班级里读书是一件种幸福的事，我们都是圆不溜秋甜得腻歪的糖葫芦，而老师就是串起我们的那根签。－－题记
People often says to the tiger is not had in “ hill, the monkey calls Xiang Yu the Conqueror ” . Short of teacher is in our class, then whole classroom is our the world, be equal to be absent at Mr. “ school, the student makes a noise ” of overturn the heavens.
人们常说“山中无老虎，猴子称霸王”。我们班只要没有老师在，那整个教室都是我们的天下，就等同于“老师不在校，学生吵翻天”。
Accompanying attend class ringingly ring, apace walks into classmates classroom, awaiting the teacher's arrival. A minute, dichotomy bell Mr. ······ still did not come. Abrupt, the monitor is like classmate break into to say: Mr. “ went attending a meeting, this class changes to study by oneself in scheduled time class. ” immediately, we are whole the class is boiling.
伴随着清脆的上课铃声，同学们快速地走进教室，等待着老师的到来。一分钟，两分钟······老师还是没有来。突然，班长肖同学破门而入说：“老师去开会了，这节课改成自习课。”顿时，我们整个班都沸腾了。来自 zUOwENbA.net
Some classmates had begun ready to do sth, in steal steal murmurous, gradually the ground our courage is great, voice is big also. We talk cheerfully and humourously together, be like even the monitor the classmate to also couldn't help opening radio receiving set. "Zhou Tongxue of " laugh grass shows two big bucktooth, make get strange expression, bring so that yellow classmate of the cold face opposite side also cannot help belly laugh. "Star " Qiu Tongxue is opening a concert, sing loudly a little while " the sea " , a little while thin tone is sung " Grain in Ear " , bring all round cheers resound like rolls of thunder. Look, "Boxer ″ Liutong learns and Fengtong of " of " female fellow learns already be all set, be not hit so that cover the head and sneak away like a rat to " of boxer of a minute of " . I take the advantage of a teacher to be absent to take out extracurricular book at once, with pleasure looked.
有的同学已经开始蠢蠢欲动，在窃窃私语，渐渐的地我们胆子大了，声音也大了。我们一起谈笑风生，就连班长肖同学也忍不住打开了话匣子。"笑草"周同学露出两颗大龅牙，并做出搞怪的表情，引得对面冷面黄同学也忍不住捧腹大笑。"歌星"邱同学在开演唱会，一会高声唱《大海》，一会细声唱《芒种》，引得周围欢声雷动。看，"拳击手″刘同学和"女汉子"冯同学已准备就绪，不到一分钟"拳击手"就被打得抱头鼠窜。我趁老师不在连忙拿出课外书，便津津有味地的看了起来。
Classmates twosome, 3 people are a team, 4 people become a group, 5 people are group. Anyway, whole classroom resembles a market same, very lively!
同学们两人一组，三人为队，四人成团，五人为群。反正，整个教室就像一个菜市场一样，十分热闹！
Abrupt, cheng classmate calls in explore outside the head says: Mr. “ comes! We return to ” quickly, place the model that writes line of business quickly, the eye is staring at back door continuously. Waited for a teacher for ages to also did not enter a classroom, just knew to be cheated by Cheng classmate, he can suffer " of our condemn of a " necessarily, the classroom becomes more lively at a draught rise, resemble a cafes.
突然，程同学收回探在外面的脑袋说：“老师来啦！”我们迅速回归，迅速摆出写作业的样子，眼睛直盯着后门。等了好久老师也没进教室，才知道被程同学骗了，他必然会遭到我们的一顿"声讨"，教室一下子变得更热闹起来，像个茶馆。
Abrupt, a person walked into a classroom quickly, ah! Teacher. Our smile is abrupt and caky, our laugh stops abruptly, whole class nots even a crow or sparrow can be heard at a draught ·····
突然，一个人快速走进了教室，啊！老师。我们的笑容突然凝固了，我们的笑声戛然而止，全班一下子鸦雀无声·····
"This class writes a composition, title " when the teacher is not attendant " ! Title " when the teacher is not attendant " !!
"这节课写作文，题目《当老师不在场的时候》！"
"Ah! Ah! . . . . . . .. "Teacher, you are too fierce! "" Ⅰ took U! "Exclamation in succession. Immediately, a sharp vision has been swept, remain " rustle " only write sound.
"啊！啊！......""老师，你太厉害了！""Ⅰ服了U！"一声声惊呼。随即，一道犀利的目光扫过，只剩下"沙沙"的写字声。
The adviser comments on:
导师点评：
Write a composition, write or meet when two people a few more relaxed, compare good depict, once write much, be no good without particular strength. Young writer kept so much fellow student, but every are written very have a characteristic, let a person look to remember, this is young writer fierce place, and recipe is sticking label to go up, stick label of a rich distinctive to everybody, so let a person easily remember. Article the language that another large window is young writer, be full of lively interest, make whole article is having a life, also drew up young him writer style of writing, very marvelous. Whole says, whole text structure is whole, clarity of a general name for arteries and veins, expression is proper, should continue to maintain go down!
写作文，写一个或两个人时会轻松一些，比较好刻画，一旦写多了，没有一定的功底就不行。小作者写了那么多同学，但每个都写得很有特点，让人看一次就记住，这是小作者厉害地方，而秘诀就在贴标签上，给每个人贴上一个富有特色的标签，那么就容易让人记住。文章另一大亮点是小作者的语言，富有活泼劲，使得整篇文章有着一股生气，也写出了小作者自己的文风，很了不起。整体说来，整篇文章结构完整，脉络清晰，表达得当，要继续保持下去呀！