I very love that lovely puppy, have lots and lots of the book of puppy. This, we went to Guangzhou growing Long Ye to give birth to the zoo.
我很喜爱那可爱的小动物，有许许多多的小动物的书呢。这一次，我们一家就去了广州长隆野生动物园。
When giving birth to the zoo to long Long Ye, over there huge crowd of people very lively. I am taken an examination of first pull a house, see there are 3 to be taken an examination of lovelily on the tree pull. One's deceased father pull the hair that has a suit gray, resembled wearing the dress of a suit gray, the eye is black, the hand is little, very lovely. Father says: “ is taken an examination of pull call a tree the kangaroo again, love to be in dry place, be in more everyday truncal on. Although it is very lovely, but it is very lazy, sleep on the tree everyday. ”
到长隆野生动物园时，那里人山人海十分的热闹。我先去了考拉馆，看见树上有三只可爱的考拉。考拉有一身灰色的毛，像穿了一身灰色的衣服，眼睛黑黑的，手小小的，十分可爱。爸爸说：“考拉又叫树袋鼠，喜爱在干燥的地方，每天多在树干上。它虽然十分可爱，但是它很懒，每天都在树上睡觉呢。”
I went to white tiger house again grand of —— composition rumble, saw feral Bai Hu, some white tigers call ceaseless on hill, seem to love us. Some white tigers are seeking delicate food, return some small Bai Hu is in and its mom is playing game.
我又去了白虎馆——作文隆隆隆，看见了凶猛的白虎，有的白虎在山上叫个不停，好像喜爱我们哦。有的白虎在寻找美味的食物，还有的小白虎在和它的妈妈在玩游戏呢。
We still went to polar bear house. Go in, saw an only lovely polar bear. Ah! Polar bear has a suit to be like the wool of snow in vain. The “ that I discover polar bear is smelly smelly ” very disgusting, like fleshy foam.
我们还去了北极熊馆。一进去，看见了一只只可爱的北极熊。啊！北极熊有一身白似雪的毛。我发现北极熊的“臭臭”十分的恶心，像肉沫似的。
In the zoo, we still saw a lot of animal such as …… of the lion, monkey, panda.
动物园里，我们还看了狮子、猴子、熊猫……等好多动物。
Ah! One day ended so, true regrettablly. Colour of sky is late already, I am forced ground of be reluctant to part with left.
啊！一天就这样结束了，真可惜。天色已晚，我只好恋恋不舍地离开了。(文/吴妤姮)