“ a minute cultivated, harvest one minute. The meaning such as ” is you pay a labor to be able to reap a profit.
“一分耕耘，一分收获。”等含义是你付出一份劳力就会收获一份收益。
Everybody says: &Ldquo; one minute cultivated, harvest one minute. I do not believe unluckily before ” , but passed this work, I the forever meaning that learned it. I am 43 classmate, perillaseed looks, when taking an exam for the first time previously, I think I met these sentences and word completely, not quite a little while I write examination paper, I think I can go up 90 minutes for certain, after so I am written, I was not checked immediately, still put him to the side of of the table it, used a book to build. I am afraid that people copies my exercise with clairvoyance, then I wait for others silently to write examination paper. After a few days, exam achievement was released, I took an examination of a few minutes 50 only actually. Deliver examination paper that is flashy case, I begin to suspect life, a few minutes 50 does perillaseed hope to be able to be you taken an examination of how possibly only? Even if again poor, I also won't take an examination of a few minutes 50 only, cannot absolutely impossible. Since then, I want to want sentence and word to be read ten times almost in the evening every day, carry them on the back completely next, when attending class serious listen to a talk, when taking an exam the 2nd times within an inch of went up 90 minutes.出自 wwW.zuoWEnBA.nEt
大家都说:“一分耕耘，一分收获。”以前我就偏偏不相信，但是经过了这件事，我永远的记住了它的意思。我是四三班的同学，苏子望，以前第一次考试的时候，我认为这些句子和单词我全都会了，不大一会儿我就把试卷写完了，我以为自己肯定会上90分，所以我写完之后我并没有立刻检查，还是把他把它放到桌子的旁边，用书盖了起来。我怕别人用千里眼来抄我的作业，于是我静静的等别人把试卷写完。几天后，考试成绩发布了，我竟然只考了50几分。发到试卷的那一瞬间起，我开始怀疑人生了，苏子望怎么可能只会考50几分呢？就算再差，我也不会只考50几分的，不可能绝对不可能。从那以后，我天天晚上几乎都要把句子和单词都要读十几遍，然后把它们全背下来，上课的时候认真听讲，第二次考试的时候差点就上了90分。
This thing tells us, if you are not paid,do not have results.
这件事告诉我们，如果你不付出就没有收获。
Author: Perillaseed looks
作者：苏子望
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A thing that the article experiences personally through oneself will make clear “ one minute cultivated, harvest the meaning of ” one minute, life of press close to is real, make a person special era is entered feeling. Nevertheless, this also is you the drawback with this the biggest composition, because too press close to lives, what write so is very insipid, meet a reader to leave impression scarcely. The teacher feels the sentence of this composition is too dull, proper use a few verbs and psychological picture will be bit better, when for instance “ takes an exam that, after I swept examination paper probably, " of inner chuckle to oneself this examination questions is too simple also " . I 3 5 divide of 2 after writing examination paper, throw it at the same time, begin to gaze around, time looks forward to to be able to pass a bit more quickly in the heart ” , if such writing, the composition can have administrative levels sex more, hope you continue to cheer!
本文通过自己亲身经历的一件事情来表明“一分耕耘，一分收获”的意思，贴近生活实际，让人非常有代入感。不过，这也是你这篇作文最大的缺点，因为过于贴近生活，所以写的非常平淡，几乎不会给读者留下印象。老师觉得这篇作文的语句过于平淡，适当的使用一些动词和心理描写会好点，比如“那次考试时，当我大概扫了一眼试卷后，内心窃喜"这次试题也太简单了吧"。我三下五除二的写完试卷后，就把它扔到一边，开始东张西望，心里盼望时间可以过得快一点”，这样写的话作文会更加有层次性，希望你继续加油！
Directive teacher: Prevent teacher
指导老师：杜老师