May a lot of people can want to know I want to take such title?
可能会有很多人都会想知道我为什么要取去这样的题目呢？
Tell you! Because of 3 grade when, I just came around experimental class the first day, my exercise was not written. Next the teacher says: “ Weng Xin stays today school. I listen to ” , astonied. I think: “ sheds class of pond ” original experiment also what they say unlike is same: In experimental class, need not write line of business so simple.
告诉你们吧！因为三年级的时候，我刚转来实验班第一天，我的作业就没有写。然后老师说：“翁昕今天留校。”我一听，大吃一惊。我想：“流塘”原来实验班也不像他们说的一样：在实验班，不用写作业那么简单。来自 zUOwENbA.net
Next, when I prepare, the teacher calls me to stay in the school, do not let me go. In my heart very afflictive. Arrived on the seat, I bend over to cry on the table. But be in the teacher's eye, tear cannot resolve an any issues. This is me it is oneself are done be bungled, not be others is done be bungled. , but because this both hands that I can use myself only comes,exchange do not take the chance of school.
然后，我准备走的时候，老师叫我留在学校，不让我走。我心里很难受。到了座位上，我便趴在桌子上哭。可是在老师的眼里，泪水是解决不了任何一件事情的。这是我是自己搞砸的，又不是别人搞砸的。，但是因此我只能使用我自己的双手来换取不留校的机会。
I love to cry very much. No matter encountered what inconvenient thing, I can cry only, shed tear, is not to solve this problem. In 3 grade when, it is good that everybody says I am a “ cry ghost ” . Because I do not want to make people says I am “ good again cry ghost ” , accordingly, I changed me to love to cry all the time, the problem that encounters difficulty to be not solved.
我很爱哭。不管遇到了什么有困难的事情，我只会哭，流泪水，而不是去解决这个问题。在三年级的时候，大家都说我是个“好哭鬼”。我因为不想再让别人说我是“好哭鬼”，因此，我改变了我一直爱哭、遇到困难不去解决的问题。
Pass this, I knew: Encounter difficulty to cannot weep, want how method solves a problem.
经过这次，我知道了：遇到困难不能流泪，要想尽办法怎么去解决问题。
The article encounters a problem through him record and narrate lachrymose story, let us see you solve the determination of the problem. The structure is whole, layer upon layer go forward one by one. Although length is smallish, but theme and center are in. The language of the article can convey his idea well and truly. But, the article also is put in the phenomenon that the statement is illogical. Begin is put the first sentence in the phenomenon that the statement is illogical, this is the problem that should appear least of all in writing. If be opposite,grow sentence cannot hold well, you can grow sentence change a few short sentence. Avoided the writing problem that spoken language turns so, hope to great deliberate wants in the process that keeping a composition later. The conclusion of the article is pithy, point out theme.
本文通过记述自己遇到问题就爱哭的故事，让我们看到了你解决问题的决心。结构完整，层层递进。篇幅虽然短小，但是主题和中心都在。本文的语言能够准确地表达自己的思想。但是，文章也存在语句不通的现象。开头第一句就存在语句不通的现象，这是写作中最不应该出现的问题。如果对长句不能很好地把握，你可以将一个长句改成几个短句。这样就避免了口语化的写作问题，希望以后在写作文的过程中要多多推敲。文章的结尾简练，点明主题。