Our great chairman Mao Zedong has said, the meal can not have one day, the book cannot be not read one day. Gorky also has said, the book is a flight of stairs that the mankind progresses. I as a child moment begins to read " case forest fairy tale " , , " 1001 night " , andersen fairy tale. Elementary school looks from 4 big famous book, my book from inside the library looks now.
我们伟大的主席毛泽东说过，饭可以一日不吃，书不能一日不读。高尔基也说过，书是人类进步的阶梯。我从小时候开始读《格林童话》、，《一千零一夜》，安徒生童话等。小学从四大名著看起，现在我从图书馆里面的书看起。
I am indecisive when finishing class everyday, at the same time people look for me to play, but I want to read, if read,I am afraid that classmates are sad, I play with classmates absent-minded, every time such my heads are a bit painful.( 作文 zUOWenba.neT )
每天下课时我都犹豫不决，同时们找我玩，可是我想读书，如果读书我怕同学们难过，我跟同学们玩就心不在焉，每次这样我的头就有点痛。
In the home when, I write exercise to read a book, although a lot of words are not known, but I still insist to read, meet occasionally such I go to school today, I read me in one's childhood your day goes going to school. I am in one's childhood he need not go to school today, when does he go to school then?
在家里时，我一写完作业就看书，虽然有很多字不认识，但我还是坚持读书，有时候会这样我今天去上学，我小时候读成我第令天去上学。我小时候就是难道他今天不用上学了，那他什么时候上学啊？
Nevertheless now won't such, I won't be acknowledge a mistake, so simple word won't acknowledge a mistake more a few numbers.
不过现在就不会这样了，我不会认错，这么简单的字更不会认错一些数字。
I am a person that loves to read very much, read the life that lets me is better, read to add color for my life, read church my a lot of knowledge, read the heaven and earth that is me, it is the key that I open wisdom entrance door, read each days when brought me extraordinary. I love to read.
我是一个很爱读书的人，读书让我的生活更美好，读书为我的生活添加了色彩，阅读教会了我很多的知识，阅读是我的天地，是我打开智慧大门的钥匙，阅读带给了我与众不同的每一天。我爱读书。
Wei Ziwei's classmate, see your composition theme, read your composition, feel your composition needs to improve: 1. The clou of the composition is to read make the life better, but, review full text, did not show on the content of the composition those who read is good. Your composition language expression is put in particular problem, cannot use concise refined language go generalizing, you also cannot describe specific example in detail, can make so reader cannot accurate understanding your meaning. 2. Read make the life better, you should tell everybody good one side, read specific how did the life that lets you ameliorate? The focal point that I recover reads namely make you vexed, read make your vocabulary big, but the life that I did not find you good, commenting terminally merely, is come to an agreement or understanding good?
魏紫薇同学，看到你的作文题目，读完你的作文，深感你的作文需要改进：1.作文的中心思想是读书让生活更美好，但是，纵观全文，作文的内容上并没有表现出读书的好。你的作文语言表达存在一定的问题，无法用简洁精炼的语言呢去概括，具体的事例你也不能详细地描述，这样就会使得读者无法准确理解你的意思。2.读书让生活更美好，你要告诉大家好的一面，读书具体让你的生活怎么变好了呢？我提取到的重点就是读书让你烦恼、读书让你词汇量大了，但我没有感觉到你的生活便美好哦，仅仅在结尾的议论，说好就是好了吗？