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小和尚听故事作文500字

2023-02-15 20:34:17六年级526

There was a mountain once upon a time, there is a cloister on hill, there are two bonzes in temple, one old one small.

从前有一座山,山上有一座寺庙,庙里有两个和尚,一老一小。

One day in the evening ……“ master, I should hear a story! ” Xiaohe Shang Shunyi arrives before old monk. “ dead fellow, was classics all read? ”“ is read! ”“ is good, began, had listened to …… to there was a mountain once upon a time, there is a temple on hill, there is an old monk in temple, he is being told, a hill ……” Xiaohe interrupted still suddenly once upon a time: “ master, had been told, tell individual. ”“ is good, there was a mountain once upon a time, there is a temple on hill, there are an old monk and a small bonze in temple, small bonze is pestering old monk taletelling, old monk is told, there was a hill ……”“ master worker once upon a time, I went sleeping. After ” Xiaohe still said, run back to a room, the heart thinks: I must let a master tell new story to me! ”

有一天晚上……“师父,我要听故事!”小和尚瞬移到老和尚面前。“死家伙,经全都读完了吗?”“读完啦!”“好吧,开始了,听好了……从前有座山,山上有座庙,庙里有个老和尚,他在讲,从前有座山……”小和尚突然打断:“师父,讲过了,讲个别的吧。”“好,从前有座山,山上有座庙,庙里有一个老和尚和一个小和尚,小和尚缠着老和尚讲故事,老和尚讲,从前有座山……”“师父,我去睡了。”小和尚说完了以后,跑回房间,心想:我必须让师父给我讲新故事!”

The following day before dawn is controlled 2:30, small bonze pushs a door gently, ground of to walk gingerly takes entrance of old monk room, light putt opens the door, affirm Laohe still slept, and without mechanism trap, pushed the door, ground of to walk gingerly went in, bend over in side of old monk side, light tone says: “ avalokitesvara says you want to tell new story to small bonze, avalokitesvara says you want to tell new story to small bonze, avalokitesvara says you want to tell ……” of new old practice to tell before dawn to control ability to answer a room to sleep 4:30 to small bonze.

第二天凌晨两点半左右,小和尚轻轻推开房门,蹑手蹑脚地走到老和尚房间门口,轻轻打开门,确认老和尚睡了,且没有机关陷阱,便推开了门,蹑手蹑脚地走了进去,趴在老和尚耳边,轻声说:“观音说你要给小和尚讲新故事,观音说你要给小和尚讲新故事,观音说你要给小和尚讲新故事……”讲到凌晨四点半左右才回房睡觉。

That day in the morning at 10 o'clock, old monk calls him, say: “ is prentice, do you know? Yesterday evening avalokitesvara Bodhisattva says I want what Shang Xinggao adopts sacrificing oneself for a just cause to tell new old practice to listen to ……” Xiaohe to you (the ground) want: Succeeded! Old monk says then: I begin “ told …… to there was a mountain once upon a time, there is a temple on hill, there are an old monk and a small bonze in temple, small bonze is pestering old monk taletelling, old monk does not want to tell, before dawn is controlled 2:30, he arrives over there old monk hypnotic him, urged two hours to just go back, in the morning, old monk is told, there was a mountain once upon a time, there is a temple ……”“ haw on hill, master, my recite scriptures went, what thing waits for me to read aloud to say again. ” next, small bonze is taking book recite scriptures.

当天早上十点钟,老和尚把他叫起来,说:“徒弟,你知道吗?昨天晚上观音菩萨说我要讲新故事给你听……”小和尚兴高采烈的(地)想:成功了!老和尚接着说:“我开始讲了……从前有座山,山上有座庙,庙里有一个老和尚和一个小和尚,小和尚缠着老和尚讲故事,老和尚不想讲,凌晨两点半左右,他到老和尚那里催眠他,催了两个小时才回去,早上,老和尚讲,从前有座山,山上有座庙……”“呃,师父,我念经去了,有啥事等我念完再说吧。”然后,小和尚拿着书念经去了。

Author: Chen Jun is shown

作者:陈俊呈

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导师点评:

This " story of Xiaohe Shang Ting " a what story to tell after all? Read an article I believe a lot of people also had listened for certain in one's childhood. Article begin is very concise, told time, place and person clearly, attract a reader. Told about old monk to tell about the cause and effect of the story to small bonze for us then, use conversational form, make the article appears vivid and specific, true and interesting, and the character's words and deeds accords with respective identity characteristic, small bonze is for instance more corrupt play, piquant, and old monk is very mature sedate. Article ending makes a person full of expect with enthusiasm, can you continue to pestering a master to give him taletelling after this small bonze? Actually real purpose of the master is to make small bonze serious recite scriptures, and the teacher's expectation is you can strike a proper balance between work and rest, effort study.

这篇《小和尚听故事》到底讲了个什么故事呢?看了文章我相信很多人小时候肯定也听过。文章开头很简洁,清楚地交代了时间、地点和人物,吸引读者。接着为我们讲述了老和尚给小和尚讲述故事的来龙去脉,采用对话形式,使文章显得生动具体,真实有趣,而且人物的言行符合各自的身份特点,比如小和尚就比较贪玩,调皮,而老和尚就很成熟稳重。文章结尾让人饱含期待与热情,这个小和尚以后会不会继续缠着师傅给他讲故事呢?其实师傅的真实用意是为了让小和尚认真念经,而老师的期望就是你可以劳逸结合,努力学习。

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