In the life of a lot of people, surely a few let us benedictory person, have …… of teacher, father and I want benedictory is child of a country.
许多人的生命中,定有几个让我们感谢的人,有老师、爸爸……而我要感谢的是一位农村娃。
Previously, I have authority to have situation ” in the “ in the class, discussing result is a the best of its kind unripe, talking a position how to say also is a monitor, theory savour, not as poor as others also.
以前,我在班里“有权有势”,论成绩是位尖子生,论地位怎么说也是班长,论品味,也不比别人差。
Later, child of a country comes around in our class, begin me to have bit of look down upon she, after finishing class, I am taking away two sisters to arrive beside her, say arrogantly: “ is green match red, red match green, typical bumpkin. The firm role that ” did not think of to she also is a glib, say: “ is red match green, green match red, spend faery only, just meet so wear! I listen to ” , the face goes up aglowly, do not say to give a word to come unexpectedly temporarily, the writing case that puts her intentionally to the side is to run down on the ground, she saw, calmingly say: “ asks your pick up to come. I listen to ” , reborn gas, the heart thinks: Does pick up come? Think beautifully, the composition returns nobody to dare follow me on the class so conversation.
后来,我们班里转来一位农村娃,开始我有点瞧不起她,下课后,我带着两个姐妹走到她身边,高傲地说:“绿配红,红配绿,典型的乡巴佬。”没想到她也是个伶牙俐齿的狠角儿,说:“红配绿,绿配红,只有花仙子,才会这么穿!”我一听,脸涨得通红,一时竟说不出话来,便故意把她放到旁边的文具盒给撞倒在地上,她见了,平静地说道:“请你捡起来。”我一听,更生气了,心想:捡起来?想得倒美,作文在班上还没人敢跟我这么说话。
Pay no attention to her so. She still did not get angry, collected writing case rise, say again: I know “ you look down on me, although you are the person of big city, than us child of home village or town has money, need not put a sheep everyday, do rough work, but the heart that our country person also has beauty of a love. Everybody is born be equality, ask you not to look down on rural person ……”
所以便不理她了。她还是没有生气,将文具盒捡了起来,又说:“我知道你们看不起我,虽然你们是大城市的人,比我们乡里娃有钱,不用每天去放羊、做粗活,可我们农村人也有一颗爱美之心。每个人生下来都是平等的,请你们不要看不起农村人……”
After I listen, think carefully, discovery is him err, in the heart very admire this country child, when seeing those put rural child of the sheep every time, total meeting remembers her word: Do not scorn rural person, want to respect them. She, let me understand this reason.
我听后,仔细一想,发现是自己做错了,心里十分佩服这位农村娃,每当看到那些放羊的农村娃时,总会想起她的一番话:不要看不起农村人,要尊重他们。她,让我明白了这个道理。
Review analyse: In the study when the Yu Ping of this article draw materials of young writer, real person, true thing, add simple language, the fact of the real situation that showed young writer flows to feel in between the lines.
评析:小作者的这篇文章取材于平时的学习中,真实的人,真实的的事,加上朴素的语言,字里行间里流露出了小作者的真情实感。