[piece one: Thank you, my teacher]
【篇一：谢谢您，我的老师】
Liao Jing
廖静
With the autumn that you meet to be harvested in!
与您相逢在一个收获的秋季！
In meaning of this poetics picture fall, it is your —— Mr. Liu Zhiwen, open literary door for us, guide us to move back and forth at literary macrocosm; You give us the truth, make us bold on classroom make a speech, each became in a word of small philosopher …… , I should say sound thanks you each days in my life!
在这诗情画意的金秋，是您——刘志文老师，为我们打开文学之门，带领我们穿梭于文学大世界；您给予我们真理，让我们在课堂上大胆发言，一个个都成了小哲人……总之，我要说声谢谢您在我生命里的每一天！
Term begins first before long, it is one waves pluvial day, although appear a little desolate, but, wind is small stealthily, of careless soft, your occurrence, make drip-drop sagacious fired the ray of 7 colour, reflection is in on the heart of everybody on the face, be full of joy and sunshine. Your Chinese class began the Chinese class ……” of this “ semester.
开学初不久，是一个飘雨的日子，虽然显得有些凄凉，但，风轻悄悄的，草软绵绵的，您的出现，使雨滴哲射出了七彩的光芒，反射在每个人的心上脸上，充满快乐和阳光。“本学期的语文课……”您的语文课开始了。
To make Chinese subject vivid and interesting, you thought method to develop a lot of gout activities, then with elementary school full day endorses the Chinese class that write from memory formed bright contrast. No less than your name, ambition and literary grace always are full of on your face. We are touched in your lecture, comprehend from inside touch, when be being comprehended, also want to thank God, because rainwater is OK moist food crops; Comprehend everything to want to retreat one pace to want, do not get into a dead end, unrestrained and far -ranging, have promising …… everywhere
为了使语文课生动有趣，您想尽办法开展了许多趣味活动，与小学那整日背书默写的语文课形成了鲜明的对比。正如您的名字，您的脸上总是充满志气和文采。我们在您的讲课中感动，从感动中感悟，感悟到即使下雨的时候，也要感谢上苍，因为雨水可以滋润五谷；感悟到凡事要退一步想，不要钻牛角尖，海阔天空，到处都有柳暗花明……
Have second attend class, we are a little clamorous, you calm and earnest ground says: I love “ you, but I hope my pay can have get one's own back! ”16 the word is like a seed from now on general, deeply brand is on my heart, I should use achievement redound you, yes, not only it is me, it is us, 8 (6) all classmate of the class!
有次上课，我们有些吵闹，您平静而严肃地说：“我爱你们，但我希望我的付出能有回报！”16个字从此如种子一般，深深地烙印在我心上，我要用成绩回报您，对，不光是我，是我们，八（6）班的全体同学！
Be who makes we write from memory regard as happy thing? It is your composition / .
是谁使我们把默写当成快乐的事情？是您作文/。
Be who makes we like above paragraphs to learn? It is you.
是谁使我们喜欢上文学？是您。
Time if running water is ordinary, already was us the 2nd year when be together in an instant.
时间如流水一般，转眼已是我们在一起的第二年了。
Countless “ are your ” base became a pyramid, send out the golden light that gives love.
无数个“是您”垒成了一座金字塔，散发出爱的金光。
Oh, we meet to be drawn in this poetics of meaning fall,
哦，我们相逢在这诗情画意的金秋，
Maple leaves are the expression that we love to yours certainly!
一片片枫叶一定是我们对您的爱的表达！
I should say sound thanks you, each days in my life!
我要说声谢谢您，在我的生命里的每一天！
[piece 2: My teacher]
【篇二：我的老师】
Cao Yujie
曹玉杰
Elementary school of dam of empress or imperial concubine of the first rank of day water city 6 grade
天水市娘娘坝小学六年级
People says, mom is only good on the world, but it is good that I feel teacher and mom are same.
人们都说，世上只有妈妈好，但我觉得老师和妈妈一样好。
Teacher, one how to make a person valued name, a how earnest name. But also be the teacher arrives from interesting Chinese Phonetic Alphabet the rhetorical gimmick of metabolic multiterminal, arrive again the ancient poetry word of meaning profundity, she is aspersed issued how many sweat, held how many heart for us. Face everyday so many pairs of curious eyes, she always is tirelessly path comes, tell us patiently, dedication gives an altruistic knowledge us, let us swim in marine Li Ao of knowledge.
老师，一个多么令人尊重的名字，一个多么严肃的名字。但也是老师从有趣的汉语拼音到变化多端的修辞手法，再到含义深刻的古诗词，她洒下了多少汗水，为我们操了多少心。每天面对那么多双求知的眼睛，她总是娓娓道来，耐心的讲给我们，无私的把知识奉献给我们，让我们在知识的海洋里遨游。
Remember going up one semester, I wrote a composition, the title of that composition cries " mom does not love me " , teacher of my 6 grade Chinese Mr. —— Mr. Zhang, published to me, that is the first composition that I write in on one semester, after publishing, comment on what there is a lot of on edition to leave a message, I am extremely happy. Be in this one semester, mr. Zhang published that my composition again, mom saw from the mobile phone, extremely glad, next, mom says to me, mr. Zhang is the very good teacher that I encounter, I but cannot disappoint Mr. Zhang expects to mine, really, I also feel Mr. Zhang is first-rate.
记得在上一学期，我写了一篇作文，那篇作文的题目叫《妈妈不爱我了》，我六年级语文老师——张老师，给我发表了，那是我在上一学期写的第一篇作文，发表以后，评论版上有很多的留言，我开心极了。就在这一学期，张老师又把我的那篇作文发表了一遍，妈妈从手机上看到了，高兴极了，然后，妈妈对我说，张老师是我遇到的很好的老师，我可不能辜负了张老师对我的期望，的确，我也觉得张老师非常好。
I still remember once, a composition that I write is very poor, the teacher makes me much write it is good to look to be able to write the composition can write the composition certainly more, I heard the word of Mr. Zhang, as expected, my composition ability promoted many, this is the teacher's contribution.
我还记得有一次，我写的一篇作文很差，老师就让我多写多看就一定能把作文写好，我听了张老师的话，果然，我的作文能力提升了不少，这都是老师的功劳。
The teacher thanks you, the childhood that thanks you to let me has glorious, I understood now, why is the flower thankful bounty, because bounty is moist,it grows, why is goshawk thankful blue sky, because blue sky lets them fly freely, why is the high mountain thankful again the earth? Because the earth lets a high mountain tower aloft,be, sapling is thankful gardener, because gardener lets their thrive,be, I should appreciate division, because the teacher gave me infinite knowledge and unselfish love!
老师谢谢你，谢谢你让我的童年有光彩，我现在明白了，鲜花为什么感恩雨露，因为雨露滋润了它成长，苍鹰为什么感恩蓝天，因为蓝天让他们自由地飞翔，高山又为什么感恩大地呢？是因为大地让高山耸立，小树之所以感恩园丁，是因为园丁让他们茁壮成长，我要感谢师，因为老师给了我无限的知识和无私的爱！