Everybody has had made a mistake, no matter it is big,still be small, every are wrong, some may lead to catastrophe, so, if we made a mistake, must want to be corrected in time.
每个人都有犯过错误，不管它是大还是小，每个错误，都有有些可能会酿成大祸，所以，我们如果犯了错误，就必须要及时改正。
Last weeks Zhou Si, the first class hour, mathematical teacher turns over the examination paper in beginning, silent as the grave, classmates are at a loss, what should not clear teacher do, so everybody begins disturbance to rise, some talks in a low voice, some make eyes, still have laugh at …… at this moment the teacher is abrupt of smilingly say: “ classmates, you feel him whats were met, today, I will take an examination of take an examination of you! Mr. ” says at the same time, deliver examination paper at the same time, not a little while, in the hand that examination paper sent us, the sound of teacher gravity rings in our side side, “ takes an exam, begin! Mr. ” one's voice in speech falls, classmates take the first stroke of a Chinese character quickly to become a problem, the athlete that resembles ran match is same, the match began, the obstacle on the road also is continuous and ceaseless. This not, I was meeting the biggest obstacle, I think hard, cudgel one's brains for, also do not want to give settlement method, I bypass this is inscribed first, continue to become a problem downward, not a little while, our bank is like behead of running water pass a barrier will, arrived at terminus eventually, at this moment, I remembered that obstacle still is in suddenly place, begin to seek the breakthrough means of that problem again, time the past of one second, I a piece another piece perform rough straw paper to give out, still want to be less than the method that solve, at this moment, with desk was over this inscribe, my heart thinks, should see her problem? It is this problem only anyway just. At this moment, a cherub and a small devil appeared in my brain, cherub says afraidly: “ you but cannot see her, you this is to this cheat this! ” small devil sneered suddenly, inciting my conscience, you can be too innocent really, if you are not written, the teacher can criticize you, if you were written, the teacher perhaps can praise you! I fall eventually finally decided determination, take the advantage of with desk carelessly, saw the result of similarly hereinafter desk, write to examination paper, I just put down a heart to come. Took an examination of finally try, awaited a teacher to correct, examination paper hair came down later, my with desk take an examination ofing more than 90 minutes, and I took an examination of more than 80 minutes however truly, I am very sad. I understand all achievement want to be obtained what pass his hard, I hearten be the same as desk apology with respect to what follow me.
上个星期周四，第一节课时，数学老师翻着手中的试卷，一言不发，同学们都不知所措，不明白老师要干什么，所以大家开始骚动起来，有的小声说话，有的挤眉弄眼，还有讥笑……这时老师突然笑眯眯的说：“同学们，你们是不是觉得自己什么都会了呀，今天，我来考考你们！”老师一边说，一边发试卷，不一会儿，试卷就都发到了我们的手中，老师严肃的声音在我们耳边响起，“考试，开始！”老师话音一落，同学们迅速地拿起笔做题，就像跑步比赛的运动员一样，比赛开始了，路上的障碍也是连绵不断。这不，我正遇上了最大的障碍，我苦苦思考，绞尽脑汁，也想不出解决的方法，我就先绕过这道题，继续往下做题，不一会儿，我行如流水过关斩将，终于到达了终点，这时，我突然想起了那个障碍还在原地，便又开始寻找那道题的突破方法，时间一分一秒的过去了，我把一张又一张的演草纸用完了，还是想不到解决的方法，这时，同桌把这道题写完了，我心想，要不要看一下她的题？反正只是这一道题而已。这时，我的脑海里出现了一个小天使和一个小恶魔，小天使担心的说：“你可不能看她的，你这是自己骗自己啊！”小恶魔突然冷笑了一下，怂恿着我的良心，你可真是太天真了，如果你不写，老师会批评你，如果你写了，老师说不定会表扬你！最后我终于下定了决心，趁同桌不注意，看了下同桌的答案，写到了试卷上，我才放下心来。最后考完了试，就等待老师批改了，后来卷子发下来了，我的同桌考了九十多分，而我确却考了八十多分，我就非常伤心。我明白一切成果都要通过自己的努力获得，我鼓起勇气就跟我的同桌道歉了。
After I decide, ten million cannot read the examination paper of others, I must want myself to want, go seeking settlement means. Err finishs sth, not terrible, but must want to know an error correctly, be brave in to face a mistake, correct an error in time. Such our abilities grow better.
我决定以后千万不能看别人的试卷，我必须要自己想，去寻找解决的方法。做错了事，并不可怕，但必须要正确认识错误，勇于去面对错误，并及时改正错误。这样我们才能更好地去成长。
Do exercises in composition is narrative and clear and coherent fluent, the key is outstanding, to oneself psychological fight depict is gotten vivid and interesting, ” of “ angelic concern and “ sneer diabolically the identity that ” accords with a character, the contradiction that lets a reader see your heart through their conversational depict conflicts, figure is specific. The sentence that imposes wave lets a person shine at the moment with new figure of speech, the difficult problem on examination paper resembles the obstacle that is the setting on track, phrasal “ is continuous and ceaseless of ” clever handling the difficult problem that invites a reader to feel examination paper clearly to go up is not general much ah! Actually our everybody can make a mistake, make a mistake not terrible, it is the most important to know a fault to change. Small you had understood this reason, believe on the growing road henceforth you can become to father at the person that be self restrained, the teacher should nod an assist for you!
习作叙事通顺流畅，重点突出，对于自己心理斗争描写得生动有趣，“天使的担心”和“恶魔的冷笑”符合人物的身份，通过它们的对话描写让读者看到你内心的矛盾冲突，形象具体。加波浪的句子以新奇的比喻让人眼前一亮，试卷上的难题就像是跑道上设置的障碍，成语“连绵不断”的巧妙运用让读者真切地感到试卷上的难题不是一般的多啊！其实我们每个人都会犯错误，犯错误不可怕，知错就改最重要。小小的你已经明白了这个道理，相信在今后的成长道路上你会成为一个严于律己的人，老师要为你点个赞哦！