Life much appearance is colorful, it often can let you be in casual innovation goes forever unforgettable small episode.
生活多姿多彩，它会经常让你在不经意间创造出一件件永远难忘的小插曲。
Mother agreed to go in the home with her boudoir honey that day be a guest, I am extremely happy, because such small boudoir that I also can see me are sweet! Before going to boudoir sweet home, we went to time of supermarket first, thinking thing past. Walk into supermarket gate, see only inside poll assemble is moved, jostle each other in a crowd, extremely lively. My overflowing comes in the change between goods shelves aimlessly change goes, left look, right look. Abrupt, I am attracted by a bottle of right, approach one look, ah! It is the one multicoloured that discharge a platoon, the vitreous bottle of colour profusion, they stand trimly on goods shelves, pass through the reflection of lamplight, extremely beautiful. I look again carefully, it is cocktail of a bottle of bottle so. I had not drunk wine, ask mother then: Can be “ drunk this, this good drink, can I want? ” mom sees the eyes that I yearn for, say: You can take “ one bottle is tasted, degree is not high, irrespective. ” mom one's voice in speech just fell, I the situation with the as sudden as lightning honey peach of that bottle of bottle in the cocktail income bursa of flavour, still keep shouting in mouth: “ is me this, this is trustee, this is strong and pervasive fragrance. . . . . . ”出处 wWW.zuOWeNBa.nEt
那天妈妈跟她的闺蜜约好去家里做客，我开心极了，因为这样我也能见到我的小闺蜜啦！去闺蜜家之前我们先去了趟超市，想着东西过去吧。走进超市大门，只见里面人头攒动，摩肩接踵，热闹极了。我漫无目的地在货架间窜来窜去，左看看，右瞧瞧。突然，我被右边的一排瓶子吸引住了，走近一瞧，呀！是一排排五颜六色，色彩缤纷的玻璃瓶子，它们整齐地站在货架上，透过灯光的折射，漂亮极了。我再仔细一看，原来是一瓶瓶鸡尾酒。我还没喝过酒了，于是问妈妈：“这个能喝吗，这个好喝吗，我可以要一个吗？”妈妈看到我渴望的眼神，说：“你可以拿一瓶尝尝，度数不高，没关系的。”妈妈话音刚落，我便以迅雷不及掩耳之势将那一瓶瓶水蜜桃味的鸡尾酒收入囊中，嘴巴里还不停都嚷着：“这个是我的，这个是董事的，这个是馨儿的......”
Thing try to win sb's favor, we are very fast come in boudoir sweet home. Take the door, I take out cocktail to be being shown off with respect to the ground of too impatient to wait, we a few young associate looked for a cup, cap was opened below the help of adult, the model has appearance ground to touch removed a glass. “ cheers! ” gently close lightly readily, a kind of exciting feeling when drinking Xue Bi is impure still full-bodied honey peach flavour spreads quickly in buccal each corner. The sense is good drink extremely! My close lightly mouth, feel it doesn't matter, won't be beverage. We honey of a few small boudoir runs in the room, playing at the same time, drinking at the same time, imperceptible one bottle is drunk. I am a bit groggy, this ability delay crosses a god to come: am I malty? Malty be this kind of appearance?
东西买好了，我们很快的来到闺蜜家里。一进门，我就迫不及待的地拿出鸡尾酒炫耀着，我们几个小伙伴找来了杯子，在大人的帮助下打开了瓶盖，有模有样地碰起了杯子。“干杯！”轻轻抿了一口，一种喝雪碧时的刺激感还掺杂着浓郁的水蜜桃味迅速地蔓延在口腔的每一个角落。感觉好喝极了！我抿了一下嘴巴，觉得没什么，不会就是饮料吧。我们几个小闺蜜跑到房间里，一边玩着，一边喝着，不知不觉一瓶喝完了。我有点摇摇晃晃的，这才缓过神来：难道我喝醉了吗？喝醉是这种样子吗？
The author was depicted to me between the article setting meets livelily between the good friend. The article is in at the beginning when, undertook be generalizinged brightly to the theme, derivative later development. Between text, undertook be tellinged about in detail to its course, particularly right shop in the supermarket and young associate people the occasion that drinks together became vivid figure reflect, those who behaved author heart is excited the affection with excitement. Article language expression is very fluent, the character is relaxed and lively, the conception of the article is very good also, but the content of its itself, can't support a such themes however. Colorful life is a gianter theme, perhaps the author still does not control, but also not be a few bottles of colorful cocktail can be behaved. Still need to undertake mining again so.
作者在文章当中给我描绘了一次好朋友之间热闹的聚会场景。文章在一开始的时候，就对主题进行了鲜明的概括，引出下文。在正文当中，对于事情的经过进行了详细的讲述，特别对超市里购物以及小伙伴们一起饮酒的场面做了生动形象的体现，表现了作者内心的激动和兴奋之情。文章语言表达很流畅，文字轻松活泼，文章的立意也很好，但是事情本身的内容，却不足以支撑这样一个主题。多彩的生活是一个比较庞大的主题，也许作者还驾驭不了，但是也不是几瓶多彩的鸡尾酒就能表现的。所以还需要再进行挖掘。