Everybody is unique oneself, everybody is not perfect individual, always a few defect are perplexing us, and these defect let us become not self-confident, admire him …… no longer
每个人都是独一无二的自己，每个人都不是完美的个体，总有一些缺点困扰着我们，而这些缺点让我们变得不自信，不再欣赏自己……
For instance I, appearance flatly, without what specialty, and result is bad also, had been compared a bit more exclusively with respect to the popularity that is me.
比如我吧，长相平平，没有什么特长，而且成绩也不好，唯一一点就是我的人缘比较好吧。
In one's childhood, often hover of these a few words cannot learn ”“ well in side side “ you this appearance is won't socially you can let the ”“ of base oneself upon I save save worry ”“ you how so I listen to not good ”…… already habit, be absent already miss go up in the heart, but be below these utterance, I become more and more not self-confident, more and more self-abased, always feel him whats are done bad. I long to get the affirmation of others.( ZuoWenbA.neT )
小时候，经常这几句话萦绕在耳边“为什么不能好好学习”“你这个样子是不会在社会上立足的”“你能不能让我省省心”“你怎么这么不乖”……我早已听习惯，早已不在记挂在心上，可是在这些言语下，我变得越来越不自信，越来越自卑，总感觉自己什么都做不好。我渴望得到别人的肯定。
Be in on street dance class, I heard some parents say accidentally: “ the pretty that this child jumps is good. I heard ” , thinking this child affirmation is very outstanding. Doing not have those who think of is, finished class, a few parents come to the side of me, ask me “ to you are the so good ” that how jumps, I was astonished, feel the heart got shake, in me the self-abased idea in brain seems that to be in slowly come out, I laugh, ask them: “ you are to asking me those ” parents' earnest inclination, I am touched very much, want to cry a bit even, I did not hear others to affirm my sound for ages really.
在一次街舞课上，我偶然听见了有的家长说：“这个孩子跳的蛮好的。”我听见了，想着这个孩子肯定很优秀吧。没想到的是，下课了，一些家长来到我身边，问我“你是怎么跳的那么好的”，我震惊了，感觉内心受到了震撼，那个在我脑子里的自卑的想法好像正在慢慢褪去，我笑了笑，问她们：“你们是在问我吗”那些家长郑重的点了点头，我很感动，甚至有点想哭，我真的好久没有听到别人肯定我的声音了。
Return the home, I sit before the desk to syare blankly, liked to go up for the first time oneself, sudden him sense seems to still be done not have so poor, self-confident flame seems to be in ablaze combustion, I laughed, those who laugh is very loud, very relaxed, the body that feels oneself becomes light, looking at those hovers freely birds outside the window, I am imagined, I am self-confident resemble them same, unrestrained.
回到家，我坐在桌前发呆，第一次喜欢上了自己，突然感觉自己好像还没有那么差，自信的火苗好像正在熊熊燃烧，我笑了，笑的很大声，好轻松，感觉自己的身体都变得轻了，望着窗外那些自由翱翔的鸟儿，我幻想，我自信的就像他们一样，无拘无束。
“ self-confidence as bamboo utensil for holding cooked rice gourd ladle is happy, ” of Jing of simian crane of peaceful be ashamed is not each person can affirm you, but oneself oneself just deserve appreciation most for certain, in life on this great river, we set sail, although can be gone aground sometimes, but self-confident tidewater also can turn you a river afresh in, let your straightway him passion.
“自信箪瓢乐，宁羞猿鹤惊”不是每一个人都会肯定你，但是自己肯定自己才是最值得欣赏的，在人生这条大河上，我们扬帆起航，即使有时会被搁浅，但是自信的潮水也会将你重新推回河中，让你畅通无阻的热爱自己。
Have deep love for oneself, just be worth to be admired most.
热爱自己，才是最值得被欣赏的。
By everybody faulty, this is our not self-confident reason the topic of this one catholicity introduces, make with oneself then exemple, a variety of defect that I get on narrate personally let him lose self-confident, and the praise of the others on dancing class makes him heavy pick up confidence, the monologize of own heart and to bird let one's thought flow freely make the composition had deepness and range. Two terminal paragraphs cite logion, reinforce the conviction of the composition, offer a point of view finally, coordinate leave piece, echo title. Whole composition structure is whole, distinct. As an argumentation, if contact the example of a few celebrity again in article, undertake analytic elaborating to these example, with the parallelism that a few have imposing manner sentence, believe the meeting is more outstanding, do you think?
由每个人都有缺点，这是我们不自信的原因这一普遍性的话题引入，接着以自己作例，叙说我身上的种种缺点让自己失掉了自信，而一次舞蹈课上别人的赞扬让自己重拾信心，自己内心的独白和对着鸟儿的畅想使作文有了深度和广度。结尾的两段引用名言，加强作文的说服力，最后提出观点，照应了开篇，呼应了题目。整篇作文结构完整，层次分明。作为一篇论说文，如果在文中再联系一些名人的事例，并对这些事例进行分析阐述，用一些有气势的排比句，相信会更出色，你认为呢？