In elementary school 4 grade, I with respect to nurturance economizing good convention. The notebook with a few gone fronts, I rise with respect to assemble, treat the opposite as the paper for making manuscript that inscribe grass is used; Father mother gives my pin money, I get a case in; Gone exercises this, I bind them rise, staying to sell reject ……
在小学四年级，我就养成了勤俭节约的好习惯。一些正面用完的本子，我就攒起来，把反面当做题草稿纸用；爸爸妈妈给我的零花钱，我都收到一个盒子里；用完的习题本，我都把它们捆起来，留着卖废品……
, school organization orders the press. I took a fancy to a fairy tale book, be called " fairy tale world " . Book value has 20 yuan of money only. But, let me 100 thinking of what do not get its to solve is, with respect to 20 yuan of money, let even hundreds of yuan of parents that draw out myself draw out money to buy this book however usually. I feel they are a bit miserly, but still return go taking money in house. After I give 20 yuan of money from the number in the box, look in past box again, ah! Do not have! Original, these 20 yuan of money are my total saving. I am taking pocket money of these 20 yuan of fund to trade whole fund with mom. Mom has received fund, several, gave me racily 20 yuan of money. The following day, I gave teacher …… 20 yuan such, I had to use the book that my money buys originally. After book hair comes down, I use leisure time to forget food and sleep the ground was read rise. At this moment, I just experience the joy that read and fun truly. Gorky says: “ book is a flight of stairs that the mankind progresses. ” I feel, this word says really to be opposite! I read this postscript, had a few to read again result, experience.来源 wwW.ZUowEnbA.nET
一次，学校组织订报刊。我看中了一本童话书，叫做《童话世界》。书价只有20元钱。可是，让我百思不得其解的是，就20元钱，平常连几百元都掏的父母却让我自己掏钱买这本书。我觉得他们有点吝啬，但还是回到屋里去拿钱了。我从盒子里数出20元钱后，再往盒里一看，啊！没啦！原来，这20元钱是我全部的积蓄了。我拿着这20元钱零钱去跟妈妈换整钱。妈妈接过钱，数了数，便痛快地给了我20元钱。第二天，我把20元交给了老师……就这样，我有了第一本用自己的钱买到的书。书发下来后，我便利用闲暇时间废寝忘食地读了起来。这时，我才真正地体会到读书的快乐和乐趣。高尔基说：“书籍是人类进步的阶梯。”我觉得，这句话说得真对啊！我读完这本书后，又有了一些读书心得、体会。
I feel the book is a bright lamp. When we are stray, it can be us how-to direction; Look in us not clear when the thing in front, it can enlighten for us ahead; When we cannot find correct solution, it is the dawn that wins together!
我觉得书就是一盏明灯。在我们迷路的时候，它能为我们指引方向；在我们看不清前面的事物时，它能为我们照亮前方；在我们找不到正确答案时，它就是一道胜利的曙光！
Ego commment: I feel to be written OKly still, still need to notice to use a word, continue to cheer!
自我评语：我觉得写得还可以，还需要注意用词，继续加油！
Parent commment: Experience is very deep still, hope you become the child that a real love reads. Absorb the nutrient knowledge in the book, thrive!
家长评语：体会还很深刻，希望你成为一个真正爱读书的孩子。吸取书中的营养知识，茁壮成长！