Dear Mayi is peaceful:
亲爱的马艺宁：
Hello! Do you know? The shadow that I resemble you is same, beside you, I am you, you are me. I should write a letter to tell you today, your inadequacy and advantage, let you correct these bad mistake.
你好！你知道吗？我就像你的影子一样，在你身边，我就是你，你就是我。今天我要写信告诉你，你的不足和优点，让你改正这些坏毛病。
You have a lot of advantages, the task that for instance you meet the serious teacher that finish decorate is seasonable emend, attend class at the same time attend a lecture makes note at the same time. Life respect is not backward also, can have managed oneself thing, accomplish fast good …… these advantages that are you, still have a lot of I did not introduce one by one. Anyhow, you are each more outstanding girl, can have done each thing seriously.
你有许多优点，比如你会认真完成老师布置的作业并及时订正，上课一边听讲一边做笔记。生活方面也不落后，会理好自己的东西，做到又快又好……这些都是你的优点，还有好多我就不一一介绍了。总之，你是个各项比较优秀的女孩子，会认真做好每一件事。
Faulty still of course. Are you still written down? Last you attend class busy move makes note, result teacher calls you suddenly to have the problem that will answer her put forward, you immediately foolish, the station is motionless beside the seat, silent as the grave. Passed a little while, the teacher called other fellow student, you are so foolish the ground stood a class, note also was not written, do not know to thinking what. This thing reveals a composition with respect to body / although you listened to also make note, but you do not love to make a speech namely, light listens not to say, how does the teacher know you listen went in, still did not listen go in? Besides attend class the speech is not vigorous, still was troubled by a few small contradiction with classmates sometimes, make a noise with the classmate but won't do,rise, still should solve a problem finally. You encounter such situation again next time, must she goes actively and she apologizes, how do you adjust feeling otherwise? These problems, I say, it is how you should change next.
当然还有缺点。你还记得吗？上次你上课正忙着做笔记，结果老师突然叫你起来回答她提出的问题，你顿时傻了，站在座位旁一动不动，一言不发。过了一会儿，老师叫了别的同学，你就这样傻乎乎地站了一节课，笔记也没写完，不知道在想啥。这件事就体现出作文/你虽然听了也做了笔记，可你就是不爱发言，光听不说，老师怎么知道你听进去了，还是没听进去呢？除了上课发言不积极，有时还和同学们闹了一些小矛盾，和同学吵起来可是行不通的，最后还是要解决问题的。你下次再遇到这样的情况，一定要自己主动去和她道歉，不然你们怎么把感情磨合呢？这些问题，我都说完了，接下来就是你应该如何改了。
To me just the inadequacy of adduce, how should you also perhaps know to corrected your bad mistake? The first, should attend class the view that much raise one's hand expresses him, missay irrespective also, it is good to correct. The 2nd, should unite with classmates friendly affection, if have,contradiction has to apologize. I hope you can correct inadequacy, the advantage also should be carried on go down, cheer! You can go!
对于我刚刚举出的不足，你也许应该也知道如何去改正你的坏毛病了吧？第一，要上课多举手发表自己的见解，说错了也没关系，改正就好。第二，要和同学们团结友爱，如果有矛盾就得道歉。我希望你能改正不足，优点也要发扬下去，加油！你能行的！
Wish
祝
School work progresses!
学业进步！
Be healthy!
身体健康！
Another you
另一个你
On July 15, 2018
2018年7月15日