[the first time the Opium War in my eye]
【我眼中的第一次鸦片战争】
Author: Valley sunlighting good people (7 grade)
作者：谷昱良（七年级）
When flourishing motherland by opium place torment when, forest criterion Xu began tiger door to sell cigarette. That sturdy act, resolute expression irritates England thoroughly.
当繁华祖国被鸦片所荼毒时，林则徐开始了虎门销烟。那坚定的举动，刚毅的神色将英国彻底激怒。
One in succession gunfire drain British anger, the motherland that is full of by gunfire is horrible, however compatriots apathetic soul was not waked up, to 1842 from 1840 the Opium War of two years began by a definite date, because the Man Qingzheng of dim corruption is adopted before government office,obstruct Guan Suoguo policy, and the England of thought lead has had the industrial revolution already, national power is mighty. In warlike start shooting when, china hit victory a few times to had been occupied windward, nevertheless path smooth emperor trusts be apt to of chancellery fine jade, he blindly sue for peace, signed humiliate the nation and forfeit its sovereignty finally " Sino-British Nanjing treaty " .
一声声炮火宣泄了英国的愤怒，被炮火充斥的祖国惨不忍睹，然而国人麻木的灵魂没有唤醒，从1840年到1842年为期两年的鸦片战争开始了，由于昏暗腐败的满清政府之前采取闭关锁国政策，而思想超前的英国早已有过工业革命，国力强大。在战争打响之时，中国打了几次胜仗已经占了上风，不过道光皇帝信任大臣琦善，他一味求和，最终签订了丧权辱国的《中英南京条约》。
“ winner emir, the person that be defeated is cardamom seed ” , " Sino-British Nanjing treaty " the first unequal treaty that is latter-day China, except reparations, hong Kong island concessive England, make England gets consular judge weighs, chinese dominion is destroyed, if Chinese position is firm, again do all one can throws a battle, so Chinese war can win almost, china is gotten the better of between the war later rate is older, it is OK to be added political reform reform, china can ascend today personally at the cogongrass before the world, it is a developing country no longer, however a developed country.
“胜者王侯，败者为蔻”，《中英南京条约》是近代中国的第一个不平等条约，除赔款之外，将香港岛让与英国，并使英国得到领事裁判权，中国主权遭到破坏，如果中国立场坚定，又有奋力投入战争，那么中国的战争几乎便可以胜利，中国便在之后的战争当中胜率更大，加上可以变法改革，中国在今天便可以跻身于世界前茅，不再是一个发展中国家，而是一个发达国家了。
Author: Geng Zixiang (6 grade)
作者：耿梓翔（六年级）
That one grave is in a blueness the cry out in distress in the dim light of night, be in harmony of blood of a drop ate dirt. Great country, drop into cereal bottom step by step from first time the Opium War, after-thought at the outset that one an unforgettable national humiliation, the corruption of the system, the fatuity of regime is incompetent, bureaucratic people be mortally afraid of death, make popular feeling painful.
那一座座青冢在夜色里呼号，一滴滴鲜血融进了泥土。泱泱大国，从第一次鸦片战争一步步跌入谷底，回想当初那一件件难忘的国耻，制度的腐败，统治阶级的昏庸无能，官僚们的贪生怕死，令人心痛。
Time backdate arrives 1840, erupted first time is Sino-British the Opium War. Each drops the bomb to position, one in succession intense gunfire, sino-British both sides has a loss each, path smooth emperor sends fine jade be apt to to go command army, can not think of he is the person of a be mortally afraid of death, his surface of one mind is a country, but dark however sue for peace, the bate that path smooth emperor hears, recall of fine jade be apt to, appoint new minister afresh, my army is in of this general lead next with irresistible force, not disappear is counted year, england exited Chinese territory. China of the Opium War of first time of first time battle wins.
时间回溯到1840年，爆发了第一次中英鸦片战争。一个个投向阵地的炸弹，一声声激烈的炮火，中英双方各有损失，道光皇帝便派琦善去统率三军，可没想到他是一个贪生怕死之人，他表面一心为国，但却暗地求和，道光皇帝闻之大怒，将琦善召回，重新任命新的大臣，我军在这位将军的带领下势如破竹，不消数年，英国退出了中国领土。第一次战争第一次鸦片战争中国胜利。
After this war, path smooth emperor killed a large number of corrupt officials, encourage peasant till the land, reduce duty Wu, large quantities of students go abroad study abroad. In former days title of East Asia sick man, formed the picture of flourishing.
此次战争后，道光帝杀掉了大量贪官，鼓励农民种田，减少税务，大批学子出国留学。昔日的东亚病夫称号，形成了欣欣向荣的景象。
Author: Lv Zunwen / beautiful jades (5 grade)
作者：吕作文/佳璐（五年级）
War, special cruelty is in my eye, because have a lot of bloodshed sacrifice. I can't help thinking of 1840 ― 1842, the Opium War in these two years, if in those days Chinese conquer, present China meets the likelihood more powerful.
战争，在我眼中是非常残酷的，因为有许多流血牺牲。我不禁想到1840年―1842年，这两年中的鸦片战争，如果那时中国战胜了，可能现在的中国会更强大。
In first time the Opium War, if China won, won't have cede territory, reparations, have trade relations and the nibble to China. First time the Opium War makes China began to reduce semi-colony semi-feudal society. The 2nd times after 14 years the Opium War came again, but China or be defeated. Of the fatuity incapacity of government office of clear affairs of state and weaponry backward, bring about China to take a beating all the time. If China learns to the west, undertake reform a bit earlier, china can become the person above average on the world, so the following the Eight Power Allied Force, the many wars such as the War of Resistance Against Japan won't happen.
在第一次鸦片战争中，中国如果胜利了，就不会有割地、赔款、通商和对中国的蚕食了。第一次鸦片战争使中国开始沦为了半殖民地半封建社会。在十四年后第二次鸦片战争又来了，可中国还是战败了。清朝政府的昏庸无能和武器装备的落后，导致中国一直挨打。如果中国向西方学习，早一点进行改革，中国就会成为世界上的佼佼者，那么以后的八国联军，抗日战争等多个战争就不会发生了。
Studied advanced contemporary history of China, I feel China at that time is not very powerful, but the effort that I believe to pass us, be in the following in the future, chinese meeting prosperity is prosperous and strong, stand erect at world nation forest.
学习了中国的先进现代史，我觉得中国当时不是很强大，但我相信通过我们的努力，在以后的将来，中国会繁荣富强，屹立于世界民族之林。
Author: Fang Dongxin (7 grade)
作者：房冬鑫（七年级）
1840, come from the England at Europe, those who began to be as long as to China two years is aggressive, used all sorts of new-style weapons, to China this cock undertook slaughtering, still signed those who make a person angry " Sino-British Nanjing treaty " , do not know to made how many Chinese be immersed in an abyss of suffering in. The fatuity incapacity that is path light brought about all these, bright can use so old territory to create, learn and use say oneself are proudly unluckily however how powerful, brought about a paragraph of dark history of Chinese finally, and he still is worn in clamour this is him to people bestow, it is a such wars make world each country right this Chinese abundant land eye covetously.
1840年，来自于欧洲的英国，开始了对中国长达两年的侵略，运用了各种新式武器，对中国这只雄鸡进行了屠杀，还签订了令人恼怒的《中英南京条约》，不知令多少中国人陷入了水深火热之中。而正是道光的昏庸无能导致了这一切，明可以利用这么大的领土来创造，学习和利用却偏偏傲慢地说自己是如何的强大，最终导致了中国一段黑暗的历史，而他还在叫嚣着这是他对人民的恩赐，就是这样一场战争使世界各国都对中国这块富饶的土地虎视眈眈。
Can if this warlike China won? Next can the war stop? Odd happiness saying kind the disposition with respect to him, must open congratulatory birthday to meet, covet high position and great wealth, take no account of China revitalize. Is England met does be apt to stop be willing to give up? The country that perhaps can matter oneself is moved, do allied forces, that consequence may be more serious. It is regime to have fun at study west advanced technique, time of a few years can prepare again? Until England comes, just perhaps build give an artillery shell wearing, can China win? The answer is negative, what is more,the rather that feudal already deeply in the heart that bake in a pan took people, is how could a war change? If days flows backwards, china also won't win, the history or meeting repeat.
可如果这一次战争中国胜利了呢？接下来的战争就会停止了吗？就单说慈禧就他的性格，非要开庆祝生日会，贪图荣华富贵，不考虑中华之振兴。英国会善罢甘休吗？也许会把自己有关系的国家搬出来，弄出个十六国联军来，那后果可能更严重了。就算是统治阶级有兴趣学习西方先进技术，可又有几年的时间准备呢？到英国来的时候，说不定才造出个炮弹架，中国能胜利吗？答案是否定的，何况封建制度已经深深地烙进了人们的心中，岂能是一场战争就改变的呢？如果时光倒流，中国也不会胜利，历史还是会重演的。