If the setback is the sea with infinite vast, so we will be ship, brave the wind and waves on the sea; If the setback is azure and capacious sky, so we will be lanneret, broken the sky is worn in the sky; If the setback is topping chain of mountains, so we will be scaler, look down at on the summit beautiful land!
若挫折是浩瀚无限的大海，那么我们将会是轮船，在大海上乘风破浪；若挫折是蔚蓝广阔的天空，那么我们将会是雄鹰，在天空中穿破云霄；若挫折是高耸山峦，那么我们将会是攀登者，在山顶上俯瞰秀丽河山！
Grow in ours in, hard to avoid can encounter a setback. Face a setback, we ought not to craven not before, however precipitant. In my eye, the setback is a small ant, conquer its not needing the slightest effort, the setback is a spit, conquer its umbrella is enough. Such looking, what reason do we still have cannot conquer setback?
在我们的成长中，难免会遇到挫折。面对挫折，我们不该畏缩不前，而是勇往直前。在我眼中，挫折就是一只小蚂蚁，战胜它不费吹灰之力，挫折就是一场小雨，战胜它一把伞就够了。这样看来，我们还有什么理由不能战胜挫折呢？
Still remember once, father teachs me roller skating shoe, I won't, thought learned confidence also was done not have. Although father still insists to teach me patiently, but no matter how I try hard again, still be make a move, throw one pace. Those who see clumsiness oneself, I lost patience finally, the choice abandoned, say to father: “ how I am experienced won't, write a composition or did not drill! ” but father is sturdy however say: “ although your trip 100, also want to stand up in 101. ” I spirit is immediately centuple, sturdy confidence, did not think of to succeed really, look at the knee of the black and blue of knock, confidence is however in the heart.
还记得有一次，爸爸教我滑旱冰鞋，我不会，便一点想学的信心也没有了。虽然爸爸还是坚持耐心教我，但是不管我再怎么努力，还是走一步，摔一步。看见笨拙的自己，我最后失去了耐心，选择放弃了，对爸爸说：“我怎么练都不会，作文还是不练了！”可爸爸却坚定的说：“即使你摔倒了100次，也要在101次站起来。”我顿时精神百倍，坚定了信心，没想到真的成功了，看着磕的青一块紫一块的膝盖，心中却是信心。
“ sunshine always is after harships, believe to have rainbow please. ” is in the following life, make we are facing again big setback to also do not back down, the rainbow after wanting to believe harships will more gorgeous. We are the former stone that treat burnish, the setback is the tool of that burnish, experienced a setback, we just can become elegant handicraft.
“阳光总在风雨后，请相信有彩虹。”在以后的生活中，使我们面对着再大的挫折也不要后退，要相信风雨后的彩虹将会更加绚丽多彩。我们是待打磨的原石，挫折是那打磨的工具，经历了挫折，我们才会变成精美的工艺品。
The setback accompanies me to grow, face correctly, ability can have more wonderful life.
挫折伴我成长，正确面对，才会拥有更精彩的人生。
The teacher comments on: Overall for, the article writes still be pretty good. Had the outline of a few argumentative writing. The clip that place arrange in order is discussed, the true example that uses oneself goes showing a setback. More convincing. Of a blemish in an otherwise perfect thing is, what the parallelism comment in front did not convey is very clear and clear, it is better to make correction meeting a bit.
教师点评：总体来说，文章写的还算是不错的。有了一些议论文的轮廓。夹叙夹议，用自己的真实事例去说明挫折。更有说服力。美中不足的是，前面的排比议论没有表达的很清楚明确，稍作修正会更好。(文/高梓涵)