[piece one: The A Erjiao Mu in my eye writes a composition]
【篇一：我眼中的阿尔焦姆作文】
Mencius hard gold
孟子钰
The figure is tall, brow is thick black, look severity, resemble a severe father already, resemble a close friend again, this is —— A Erjiao Mu.
身材高大，眉毛浓黑，目光严厉，既像一位严厉的父亲，又像一位亲密的兄长，这是——阿尔焦姆。
The A Erjiao Mu in my eye is one loves a dear one very much, care a family member, abhor the person that unreasonable pay exists in rabble. Baoeryin scatters cigarette ash on the dough of Abba Easter and by school discharge, job of station dining room left in the help of mother and elder brother, because preserve the mutinous nature of Er, he everywhere be rebuffed, take a beating and be driven out, he by v/arc waiter general after Luo Huoer going-over, told anxious Mu of elder brother Aer this thing. In the heart that protect Er, anxious Mu of elder brother Aer is a lofty and big and tall person, a Erjiao Mu seeks general Luo Huoer account angrily, beat up he is one, by coop military police. Later, he goes all lengths the side protected Er to seek a new job in power plant, protect Er to also need not return that abominable place again so. He loves his little brother very much, when him little brother is harmed, he revenges none hesitantly to the little brother, for little brother defend sb against an injustice; He loves to care his family member very much, the little brother went station, got over however in the dining room unfair treatment, he feels to this rough, cast energy of life on Puluohuoer's body so.
我眼中的阿尔焦姆是一个很爱亲人，关心亲人，憎恶下层社会中存在不合理待遇的人。保尔因在神父复活节的面团上撒烟灰而被学校开除，在母亲和哥哥的帮助下到了车站食堂工作，由于保尔的反抗性格，他到处碰壁、挨打和被驱逐，他被堂倌普罗霍尔毒打后，把这件事告诉了哥哥阿尔焦姆。在保尔心里，哥哥阿尔焦姆是一个高大魁梧的人，阿尔焦姆生气地去找普罗霍尔算账，痛打了他一顿，被关进宪兵队。之后，他竭尽全力帮保尔在发电厂找了一份新的工作，这样保尔就再也不用回到那个令人憎恶的地方了。他很爱自己的弟弟，在自己弟弟受到伤害的时候，他毫不犹豫地给弟弟报仇，为弟弟打抱不平；他很爱关心自己的亲人，弟弟去了车站，在食堂却在那里受到了不公平的待遇，他对此而感到不平，所以把气撒在了普罗霍尔的身上。
The A Erjiao Mu in my eye is an example, it is to protect Er to be benefited example of all one's life. A Erjiao Mu makes protect Er and Zhu He to was known, make protected Er to learn a lot of knowledge about the party, this pair protects Er the life henceforth and form have very great help. Who is the life adviser that speaks of to protect Er? Undoubted, it is Zhu He come. If do not have the help of A Erjiao Mu, protect Er to won't know Zhu He to come, protect Er to learn won't the knowledge of the party, protect Er to there won't be great success on the road henceforth, protect Er to won't become a of the Bolshevik more. So, who is saying the teacher that protects Er, not only aid Zhu He to come, have the recommend of anxious Mu of his elder brother Aer more.
我眼中的阿尔焦姆是一个榜样，是保尔受益终身的榜样。阿尔焦姆使保尔和朱赫来认识了，使保尔学会了许多关于党的知识，这对保尔今后的人生和形成有很大的帮助。说起保尔的人生导师是谁？无疑，是朱赫来。如果没有阿尔焦姆的帮助，保尔不会认识朱赫来，保尔学不会党的知识，保尔在今后的道路上不会有大的成就，保尔更不会成为布尔什维克的一员。所以，说保尔的恩师是谁，不仅有助朱赫来，更有他的哥哥阿尔焦姆的引荐。
The A Erjiao Mu in my eye is the person of a justice. Be caught in him German when driving the train, they for oneself and other political parties and groups the safety of uprise army, not hesitate killed German. is he frame-up justice? For others, he nots hesitate go killing German, supporting to risk dead accusation to do this dread, explain he has the courage of the logistic thinking of careful and face the music, and ad cool-headed and sober perseverance.
我眼中的阿尔焦姆是一个正义的人。在他被抓去给德国人开火车的时候，他们为了自己和其他党派起义军的安全，不惜杀死了一个德国人。难道他不正义吗？为了别人，他不惜去杀死德国人，顶着冒死的罪名来做这件可怕的事，说明他有缜密的逻辑思维和临危不惧的勇气，以及沉着冷静的毅力。
The A Erjiao Mu in my eye is one has sturdy hope to the party, it is a faithful revolutionary soldier. On the memorial meeting that dies in Lenin, a Erjiao Mu and other 30 workers comrade signed a requisition, the request joins party of dimension of Boer gram assorted. They are having the sturdy hope to the party, lenin is the founder of Bolshevik party, on his memorial meeting, he still believes Bolshevik party, and resolutely the affiliation of definitely this organization.
我眼中的阿尔焦姆是一个对党有坚定信心，是一个忠诚的革命战士。在列宁逝世的追悼会上，阿尔焦姆和其他三十名工人同志署名了一份申请书，请求加入布尔克什维党。他们有着对党的坚定信心，列宁是布尔什维克党的奠基人，在他追悼会上，他仍然相信布尔什维克党，并毅然决然的加入了这个组织。
A Erjiao Mu is the epitome of a great proletarian laborer, he is having working-class high quality, had indefatigable accuse and denounce at a meeting with the enemy, it is Zhu He comes best assistant. His disposition is earnest, but love to protect Er very much however.
阿尔焦姆是一个伟大的无产阶级劳动者的缩影，他有着工人阶级的高贵品质，和敌人进行了不懈的斗争，是朱赫来最好的助手。他性格严肃，但却很爱保尔。
[piece 2: The A Erjiao Mu in my eye writes a composition]
【篇二：我眼中的阿尔焦姆作文】
Zhang Jingru
张静茹
Elder brother, it is to be next to parents' closest person. If the elder brother's love is same blaze, the heart of warm person; The elder brother's love is like same field rain during springtime, the heart of moist person; If the elder brother's love is same a cool breeze, the heart of insufflate person. What the elder brother's love loves without father is dark, those who do not have mother love is great, make a person unforgettable likewise however.
哥哥，是仅次于父母最亲的人。哥哥的爱如同一把火焰，温暖人的心灵；哥哥的爱如同一场春雨，滋润人的心田；哥哥的爱如同一股清风，吹进人的心灵。哥哥的爱没有父爱的深沉，没有母爱的伟大，却同样让人难忘。
· Andre of A Er anxious Mu gold of examine of · of Ye Wei Ji stalking or branch, " iron and steel is how refine becomes " story hero protects Er the elder brother of gold of · examine stalking or branch. As an elder brother, I think he is enough already and competent.
阿尔焦姆·安德烈耶维奇·柯察金，《钢铁是怎样炼成的》故事主人公保尔·柯察金的哥哥。作为一个哥哥，我认为他已足够称职。
A Erjiao Mu, a train driver. Protect Er to be sent a station by the mother when 12 years old, after the dining room works, composition / the neglect that works as a result of, er was protected to suffer cuff and kick over. After A Erjiao Mu knows, that bully was hit to protect the v/arc waiter of Er before going up, recapture justice to protect Er, found the job of a power plant additionally to protect Er. A Erjiao Mu is right it is thus clear that of the little brother favorite, not allow to make a little brother suffer absolutely bully.
阿尔焦姆，一位火车司机。保尔在12岁时被母亲送到车站，食堂工作后，作文/由于一次工作的疏忽，在那里保尔遭受了拳打脚踢。阿尔焦姆知道后，上前打了那个欺侮保尔的堂倌，为保尔夺回公道，并为保尔另寻了一份电厂的工作。可见阿尔焦姆对弟弟的宠爱，绝不容许弟弟受欺负。
Be in in A Erjiao Mu and 3 trains driver when be forced to drive, killed German, countryside escapes later. Can cherish A Erjiao Mu the little brother not only, more bold and powerful and doughty.
在一次阿尔焦姆及三个火车司机在被迫开车时，杀掉了一个德国人，之后逃离乡下。可将阿尔焦姆不仅爱护弟弟，更是勇猛刚强。
After revolution will erupt in October, protect Er to grab come a gun, but German should confiscate this to approve a weapon, after A Erjiao Mu knows this matter, be afraid of the gun that keeps Er by German after ransacking, shoot protect Er, so but under smash the gun that keeps Er. The care care of visible Aer anxious Mu to the little brother and when facing a problem decisive.
10月革命爆发后，保尔抢来一把枪，但德国人要没收这批武器，阿尔焦姆知道此事后，怕保尔的枪被德国人搜查到后枪毙保尔，所以无奈之下把保尔的枪砸碎。可见阿尔焦姆对弟弟的关心爱护及面临问题时的果断。
After protecting Er to be caught, a Erjiao Mu passes wintry Ni inferior knew this news, he is very anxious, want to go rescue protects Er, but by wintry Ni inferior dissuaded. It is thus clear that A Erjiao Mu is in when hearing little brother get into trouble anxious.
保尔被抓走后，阿尔焦姆通过冬妮亚知道了这个消息，他十分焦急，想要去解救保尔，但被冬妮亚劝阻了。可见阿尔焦姆在听到弟弟陷入困境时的焦急。
After Lenin dies, one of hundred thousands of workers A Erjiao Mu joined the Communist Party.
在列宁逝世之后，几十万工人之一的阿尔焦姆加入了共产党。
When the illness that protect Er is aggravating, often write letter and elder brother to chat, visible brother situation is difficult.
在保尔病情加重时，经常写信与哥哥交谈，可见兄弟情深。
A Erjiao Mu succeeds to grow to return committee chairman to save respectful gradually from worker of factory of a shunting after effort, it is Zhu He comes best assistant. He has working-class high quality, have indefatigable accuse and denounce at a meeting with the enemy, a Erjiao Mu is as deep as the brotherhood that protect Er, do not wish to protect Er to be harmed.
阿尔焦姆在努力后成功从一个调车厂工人逐渐成长为省肃反委员会主席，是朱赫来最好的助手。他具有工人阶级的高贵品质，与敌人进行不懈斗争，阿尔焦姆与保尔手足情深，不愿保尔受到伤害。
The elder brother's love is OK also very altruistic. The old man of effort of this a suit is the little brother's staunchest backer, he does his utmost to be in open a season for the little brother, hold off a rain, protected Er to get fatherly love and solace on elder brother body.
哥哥的爱也可以很无私。这个一身力气的大男人是弟弟最坚强的靠山，他竭力在为弟弟撑起一片天，挡住一场雨，保尔在哥哥身上得到了父亲般的爱与慰藉。
[piece 3: The A Erjiao Mu in my eye writes a composition]
【篇三：我眼中的阿尔焦姆作文】
Li Yu deeps and clear
李钰潇
Ye Wei Ji of · Andre of A Er anxious Mu, be " iron and steel is how refine becomes " the hero protects Er the elder brother of gold of · examine stalking or branch.
阿尔焦姆·安德烈耶维奇，是《钢铁是怎样炼成的》主人公保尔·柯察金的哥哥。
His disposition is bold and powerful and doughty, not Wei is brutal, as deep as affection of the brother that protect Er. After should protecting Er to open faucet during the job, when be asleep not carefully, current invaded a station, caused needless trouble and loss to the passenger, sufferred the going-over of Luo Huoer of v/arc waiter general however, bring about insensible. The following day, a Erjiao Mu knew this thing from inside the mouth that protect Er, found Puluohuoer and punished him again again. After 6 days in the evening, just return the home, found a job in the power plant to protect Er, can experience A Erjiao from inside this thing Mu and protect Er in that way brother situation is difficult, also can see the love of A Erjiao Mu to protecting Er and care.
他性格勇猛刚强，不畏强暴，与保尔兄弟情深。当保尔在工作期间打开水龙头后，不小心睡着时，水流侵入了车站，给旅客造成了不必要的麻烦和损失，却遭到了堂倌普罗霍尔的毒打，并导致昏迷。第二天，阿尔焦姆从保尔口中知道了这件事，就找到了普罗霍尔并重重的惩罚了他。六天之后的晚上，才回到家，并为保尔在电厂找到了一份工作，从这件事中可以体会到阿尔焦姆与保尔那样的兄弟情深，也可以看出阿尔焦姆对保尔的爱和关心。
A Erjiao Mu and Siqiaosha marry later moment, marry into and live with wife's family reached a 5 when do not have male labour force home, became come husband, in after he comes off work from engine library, arrive home everyday, effort of exert whole body is pulled plow agrarian field, the family property of reforming decline. In the eye that protect Er, the farmer is backward unwisdom, protect Er to feel disgusted very to the marriage of A Erjiao Mu. Because protect Er,be born on one hand city, live with the country antipathetic, on one hand according to at that time extremely the thoughts of “ left ” sees a problem, the farmer is small demesne person, rich farmer is the object with sweeping revolution.
后来阿尔焦姆与斯乔莎结婚时候，入赘到了一个没有男劳动力的五口之家，当了上门女婿，每天他从机车库下班之后就来到家中，使出全身力气拉犁耕田，重整衰败的家业。在保尔眼中，农民是落后愚昧的，保尔对阿尔焦姆的婚姻十分反感。一方面由于保尔出生城市，和农村生活格格不入，一方面按照当时极“左”的思潮看问题，农民是小私有者，富裕的农民是革命扫荡的对象。
When Lenin dies, a Erjiao Mu told about his life to experience on congress, he says: Why was “ just burned in revolutionary blaze is a Bolshevik become when rising? From 1918 actually we are held oppose heart big strike, that moment should be on this road, after a civil war ends, marry, parturient …… a series of housekeeping stalled me. ” A Erjiao Mu returns the life that said “ him reviewing, look clear what to lack among this, we guard Soviet political power merely insufficient still, should join it like family. Will accede Lenin unfulfilled wish, like wanting to let Soviet political power resemble the mountain peak of iron, stand erect is worn. The speaking guileless of ” A Erjiao Mu the attitude is true.
当列宁逝世的时候，阿尔焦姆在大会上讲述了他的人生经历，他说：“为什么没有在革命烈火刚一烧起来的时候就成为一名布尔什维克？其实从1918年我们举行反德大罢工，那时候就应该走上这条路，在一场内战结束后，结婚、生子……一系列的家事把我拖住了。”阿尔焦姆还说了“回顾自己的生活，看清了这当中缺少了什么，我们仅仅保卫苏维埃政权还不够，应该像家人一样加入它。来继承列宁遗志，要让苏维埃政权像铁的山峰一样屹立着。”阿尔焦姆的讲话朴实又态度真诚。
This word drive of A Erjiao Mu is worn we, we also should make contribution for the motherland, review oneself lifetime, look what to lack? What to lose?
阿尔焦姆的这番话激励着我们，我们也应该为祖国做贡献，回顾自己的一生，看看缺少了什么？丢失了什么？
[piece 4: The A Erjiao Mu in my eye writes a composition]
【篇四：我眼中的阿尔焦姆作文】
Gu Yu glume
贾钰颖
What is the most commendable? Kiss affection, it is close affection absolutely.
什么最可贵？亲情，绝对是亲情。
This great elder brother, assume the economic responsibility in build up as a child. He is a tall and bulky man, but his heart is however such exquisite.
这位伟大的哥哥，从小就承担起家中的经济负担。他是一个高而粗大的男人，但他的心却又是如此的细腻的。
Be forced when the little brother when discontinue one's studying, he says to protecting Er: “ bygone calculated, in the future can want to take care to work, do not make fun of pattern, this dry dry good ……” he repeatedly enjoin to protect Er, do not enter a thing not to make a mother afraid, the elder brother is to protecting the love of Er and mother can experience the …… that come out from which
当弟弟被迫辍学时，他对保尔说：“过去的事就算了，往后可要小心干活，别耍花样，该干的都干好……”他再三的嘱咐保尔，不要闯事别让母亲担心，哥哥对保尔和母亲的爱是能从中体会出来的……
When working with respect to a cafeteria in the station, because the job is too tired,protect Er, sprinkled water whole dining room, v/arc waiter gives him hit. The elder brother comes home asked who was hit after protecting Er, whats did not think, rush into directly, ko v/arc waiter, although by coop military police, but he also thinks is worthiness. This is a great elder brother, although he is right at ordinary times,protect Er very severe exacting, but the moment of truth is him,the first comes out to protect a little brother. Do not let a little brother be upset by unkindness. After coming out from military police, he returns the home to comfort a little brother at once, care a little brother, disregard oneself fame completely, he is a man that loves most to protecting Er.
就在车站的一个餐馆工作时，保尔因为工作太累，将水撒到了整个餐厅，堂倌便把他给打了。哥哥回家问了谁打了保尔之后，什么都没想，直接闯进去，将堂倌打倒在地，虽然被关进宪兵队，但是他也以为是值得的。这是一位伟大的哥哥，虽然他平时对保尔很严苛，可是关键时刻是他第一个出来保护弟弟的。不让弟弟受委屈。从宪兵队出来后，他就赶快回到家去安慰弟弟，关心弟弟，完全不顾自己的声誉，他是一位对保尔最爱的男性。
When protecting Er to get a severe disease, when he receives the letter that keeps Er, the mood is how disturbed, take things too hard of little brother of for fear that, be full of disappointment to the life, his the sort of agog nobody can be experienced.
在保尔病重时，他收到保尔的信时，心情是多么的不安，生怕弟弟想不开，对生活充满失望，他的那种急切是无人可以体会到的。
This lifetime of the elder brother, he bears the burden in the home on his body as a child. The elder brother's heroism also can see from inside a lot of stories. He gives German when driving the train not dread is dangerous, will German beat dead, he is not to be his completely, however for justice. Although he is after this, break away from revolutionary contrail, but he has revolutionary understanding. After Lenin dies, he resolutely of definitely attended a party, persuade in what protect Er under, he became Soviet chairman. He is a good assistant more, he is right for Zhu He, want to need him only, he can help at any time. His gallant one side is not less than protecting Er.
哥哥的这一生，他从小就把家中担子背在自己的身上。哥哥的英勇也是从许多故事中可以看出的。他给德国人开火车的时候不惧危险，将德国人打死，他并不是全为自己，而是为了正义。虽然他在这之后，脱离革命的轨迹，但他是有革命觉悟的。在列宁去世之后，他毅然决然的参加了党，在保尔的劝说之下，他当上了苏维埃主席。他更是一个好助手，他对朱赫来说，只要需要他，他随时都可以帮忙。他英勇的一面并不比保尔少。
This elder brother, he is altruistic, great, ready him dedication is very deep to protecting the love of Er, this male is marvellous in my eye, it is a bright person, the incisively and vividly that close affection place reflects! We should learn his heroism more!
这位哥哥，他是无私的，伟大的，甘于奉献自己对保尔的爱是很深的，这位男性在我眼中是棒的，是一个鲜明的人物，将亲情所体现的淋漓尽致！我们更要学习他的英勇！