“ child soon the world, world change fast ” ! This world changes now but really enough fast ah! Do not believe you to listen to me fine fine line comes.
“童眼看世界，世界变化快”！现在这个世界变化可真够快的呀！不信你听我细细道来。
“ eats ”—— to say, authority is not new. Already had the culture history 5000 because of our mankind, since the culture that had the mankind to begin “ to eat ” . Former ordinary other people, what is what they eat suddenly suddenly? Then the person does not eat be in our eye, but they still eat,get with pleasure. Every day can cram oneself with food, had been very happy, still allow you choice? The flesh that on holidays can see the star is nodded is not carried then have much bright! Where is the eats today what after 30 years? I return the home, there are 3 grails on dining table: Black and white green is cook again flesh; Of red olivine is beef of braise in soy sauce; Olivine is white is ginger explodes duck; Adscititious soup of a mushroom. This life follows to be compared before rising is the world in heaven really then! The grandma often says, the landlord eats well now without me before.
“吃”——说起来呀，大家都不陌生。因为我们人类已有五千年的文化历史了，自从有了人类就开始了“吃”的文化。从前的平常人家，他们顿顿吃的是什么？在我们眼里那就不是人吃的，可是他们还是吃得津津有味。天天能填饱肚子，就已经是很幸福的了，还容你挑三拣四吗？逢年过节能看见星点的肉那别提有多爽哦！三十年后的今天吃的什么呢？我回到家，饭桌上有三大盘：黑白绿的是回锅肉；红黄绿的是红烧牛肉；黄绿白的是姜爆鸭；外加一个蘑菇汤。这生活跟以前比起来那真是天堂中人间呀！奶奶经常说，以前地主都没有我现在吃得好。
“ drinks ” -- have in ancient times drink drink tea, dividing is to drink plain boiled water in addition. Now drink simply too rich, what beverage, mineral water, the breed that smooth beverage is not over with respect to know exactly about sth. Today's child is very happy really, do not know to had drunk how many beverage, and former person is never heard of before at all, see also had not seen. Say an old truth nevertheless, those carbonic acid beverage are drunk much the growth that can affect us of development, drink less still had better oh!
“喝”――古时有喝酒喝茶，除此外就是喝白开水了。而今的喝简直太丰富了，什么饮料、矿泉水，光饮料就有数不完的品种。今天的小孩真的好幸福，不知喝过多少饮料，而从前的人根本就是闻所未闻，见也未见过。不过说句老实话，那些碳酸饮料喝多了会影响我们的生长发育的，还是少喝为妙哟！
“ plays ” -- today's “ plays ” , let every child for, can say 3 night on 3 days. Listen to mom to say, from be born to now, want the toy that is popularity only, I had been bought. My room, toy difference does not write a composition / occupied most space more: Whats have …… of car, boat, gun, plane, can open a toyshop simply. And I most those who dote on still is remote control car, want to play everyday almost, everybody calls car of my “ remote control to have a fever friendly ” . Still have remote control car changing one's costume or dress sometimes, the some of remote control car after changing one's costume or dress can be in only place revolve, and some criterion speed is extraordinary. No matter change his costume or dress how, father is encouraged, teach me to want much beat one's brains to start work as a child. And father can play silt only in one's childhood, roll …… of bend of iron hoop, projectile to be compared with me, I am too happy really. No wonder, father often says I am born in blessing not to tell good fortune.
“玩”――今天的“玩”，让每个小孩来说，都能说上三天三夜。听妈妈说，从出生到现在，只要是流行的玩具，我都买过。我的房间，玩具差不作文/多就占了大半空间：车、船、枪、飞机……什么都有，简直能开个玩具店了。而我最钟爱的还是遥控车，差不多每天都要玩一下，大家都叫我“遥控车发烧友”。有时还把遥控车进行改装，改装后的遥控车有的只能在原地打转，而有的则速度非凡。不管改装得怎样，爸爸都鼓励、教育我从小要多动脑动手。而爸爸小时候只能玩泥沙、滚铁环、射弹弓……跟我比起来，我真是太幸福了。怪不得，爸爸经常说我生在福中不知福。
Thing of present “ happy ” is great! No matter be adult or child, big city still is little place, the means of libertinism is too much. My dot likes pleasure ground most. Walk into pleasure ground, the world that became us, …… of dodgems, corsair, switchback we do as one wants in pleasure ground “ ” . Old people likes to drink tea to chat, fitness dances, exercise …… their recreational means is without number more.
现在的“乐”事多多呀！不管是大人还是小孩，大城市还是小地方，玩乐的方式太多了。我小孩子最喜欢游乐场了。一走进游乐场，就成了我们的天下了，碰碰车、海盗船、过山车……我们在游乐场“为所欲为”。大人们就喜欢喝茶聊天，健身跳舞，锻炼身体……他们的娱乐方式更是数不胜数。
Look! Our life is much happier today! The life of all these happiness should be attributed to grandpa ** , we thank him! Be born in blessing, we should learn well, build our motherland more goodly in the future!
瞧！今天我们的生活多幸福呀！这一切美好的生活都应归功于**爷爷，我们感谢他！生在福中，我们要好好学习，将来把我们的祖国建设得更加美好！
Review object lesson: “ child soon the world, world change fast ” ! Young writer is provided alone a mind which perceives both past and future, eat from “ , drink, play, a few levels write happy ” the happy life that reforming and opening brings, eulogized grandpa ** . Text structure is clear, with small see big. Want to have the eye that a pair of meetings watch only, temporal all contain is worn beautiful!
评鉴：“童眼看世界，世界变化快”！小作者独具慧眼，从“吃、喝、玩、乐”几个层面写改革开放带来的幸福生活，歌颂了**爷爷。文章结构清晰，以小见大。只要有一双会观察的眼睛，世间万物均蕴藏着美丽！