[" Shan Juqiu sets " adapt]
【《山居秋暝》改写】
Lotus China elementary school brook of Buddhist of 2 grade Zhao
莲华小学二年级赵梵溪
Just issued a fine drizzle in the hill of open, in hill everywhere drenched. The gem that drip resembles blue and white is same. Gem slips from blade in earth, leaf got gem, agitato became red face. Zephyr girl comes down to wave on yellow Xie Congshu everywhere, they say: “ should come in the evening. ”
在空阔的山中刚刚下了一场蒙蒙细雨，山中到处湿淋淋的。水珠就像蓝色和白色的宝石一样。宝石从叶片上滑到土里，叶子得到了宝石，兴奋地红了脸。黄叶从树上下来和风姑娘飘到各处，它们说：“晚上要来了。”
As expected, came in the evening, that face of round circle resembles the moon jade dish same circle, star is blinking an eye to look at the scenery in hill curiously. Moon wraps around white gauze garment on piny body, clear spring water plays around the pine forest a babbling composition.
果然，晚上来了，月亮那圆圆的脸像玉盘一样圆，星星眨着眼睛好奇地看着山中的风景。月光把白纱衣披在了松树的身上，清澈的泉水围绕松林弹奏起叮咚的乐曲。
The sun rises in the morning, differ meeting, transmit clamorous sound, birdie wants to have a look, chirping birdie is to say: “ is to washed the girls of the dress to come. ” has clamorous voice again suddenly, frog volunteers to want to look, quack Gu, frog says: “ is the fisher that fish came back, still took many fish! ”
早上太阳升起，不一会，就传来吵闹的声音，小鸟想去看一看，叽叽喳喳小鸟是说：“是洗衣服的少女们来了。”忽然又有吵闹的声音了，青蛙自告奋勇要看看，呱呱呱，青蛙说：“是打鱼的渔夫回来了呢，还带了不少鱼呢！”
Midday, autumn wind is blown, fruit grows, like be like spring. Very much noble youth comes in the hill that this Tian Lang enrages clear. Wang Wei also is intoxicated in this beautiful scenery, can't help brandish pen writes down Shan Juqiu of —— of a poem to set.
中午，秋风吹来了，果子长出来了，就好像春天一样。很多的贵族青年都来到了这个天朗气清的山中。王维也陶醉在这美丽的风景中了，不由得挥笔写下一首诗——山居秋暝。
Lotus China elementary school grain of rice of 3 grade gold
莲华小学三年级金米粒
Hollowness is quiet unmanned big hill, just issued drizzle of wool of a wool, cold weather, the autumn came gradually. Shanshangyi cuts what become damp, huang Huang's leaf and forceful pine also become drenched.
空旷安静无人的大山，刚刚下了一场毛毛细雨，冷冷的天气，秋天渐渐地到来了。山上一切都变得湿漉漉的，黄黄的叶子和挺拔的苍松也变得湿淋淋。
Instead: The big hill with quiet hollowness, just issued drizzle of wool of a wool, shanshangyi cuts what become damp. Those who pass rainwater clean, what the leaf fizzles out is brighter, pine is more forceful and verdant. A cool wind has been blown, the autumn came!
改为：空旷安静的大山，刚刚下了一场毛毛细雨，山上一切都变得湿漉漉的。经过雨水的清洗，树叶黄的更鲜亮了，苍松更加挺拔苍翠了。一阵凉爽的风吹过，秋天来了！
Bright bright bright moon ases if is a big jade dish, illuminate between the pine, resemble having for nothing frost. Clear spring water is in the stone of brightly colored is genteel.
亮亮的明月仿佛是一个大玉盘，照在松间，像有一条白白的霜。清澈的泉水在花花绿绿的石头上流着。
Instead: Buddha of bright and clear bright moon Fang is a big jade dish, white moon is aspersed between pine, draped to pine it seems that thin thin fine gauze. Clear spring water is in the stone of brightly colored is genteel, give out bite babble the sound of Dong, very pleasant.
改为：皎洁的明月彷佛是一个大玉盘，洁白的月光洒在松树间，似乎给松树披上了一层薄薄的轻纱。清澈的泉水在花花绿绿的石头上流着，发出叮叮咚咚的声音，非常动听。
Dark green Zhu Lin is Bacchic rose, it is to washed the girl of the dress to come back so. Pink lotus is moved, give out a scent, it is fished fisher so taking the joyance of the bumper harvest to come back. Although spring had gone, but sensory spring has not gone far. Wang Wei sees such beautiful scenery, wrote down uncontrollably " Shan Juqiu sets " :
碧绿的竹林喧闹起来了，原来是去洗衣服的少女回来了。粉红的莲花动了动，发出一股芳香，原来是捕鱼的渔船带着丰收的喜悦回来了。春天虽然已经走了，但感觉春天还没有去远。王维见到如此美景，情不自禁写下了《山居秋暝》：
After empty Shan Xinyu, weather comes late autumn.
空山新雨后，天气晚来秋。
Illuminate between bright moon pine, qing Quanshi is genteel.
明月松间照，清泉石上流。
Zhu Xuan puts in wash daughter 's charge, lotus moves Yu Zhou.
竹喧归浣女，莲动下渔舟。
Optional Chun Fang rests, offspring of the nobility can stay oneself.
随意春芳歇，王孙自可留。
3 grade wear lotus China elementary school continent jade
莲华小学三年级戴洲玉
On the big hill that does not have one person for nothing, just issued fine drizzle, everything all round is drenched. There is gules maple part of a historical period on hill, maize mother chrysanthemum, return multicoloured of viridescent pine …… , extremely beautiful!
空无一人的大山上，刚下了蒙蒙细雨，周围的一切都湿淋淋的。山上有红色的枫叶，黄色的野菊花，还有绿色的苍松……五颜六色，美丽极了！
Suddenly flashy, arrived in the evening, the bright moon is just as a huge jade dish, gentle moon is illuminated to pine, resembled putting on hazy gauze garment to pine, composition / clear the spring that sees an end from a stone is genteel over- , asing if is nature in spiccato and beautiful air.
忽然一瞬间，晚上到了，明月犹如一个硕大的玉盘，轻柔的月光照到松树上，就像给松树穿上了朦胧的纱衣，作文/清澈见底的泉水从一块块石头上流过，仿佛是大自然在弹奏优美的旋律。
Quiet Zhu Lin suddenly Bacchic rise, report to people the women that wash the dress returned, dark green lotus leaf, pink lotus is moved will be moved, gave a water route, it is fisher so people came back, can hear lively fisherman's song beyond, show fisher people bumper harvest a lot of fat big fish.
安宁的竹林忽然喧闹起来，向人们报告洗衣服的女人们回来了，碧绿的莲叶，粉红的莲花动来动去，开出了一条水路，原来是渔夫们回来了，在远处就能听到欢快的渔歌，说明渔夫们丰收了很多肥胖的大鱼。
Spring had gone, but the scenery here still beautiful, fang Buddha spring has not gone far. Aristocratic children likes to stay here, wang Wei also likes the beautiful scenery here. Then, his poem sex is sent greatly, carry a pen to write down a poem " Shan Juqiu sets " .
春天已经过去了，但这里的景色依然美丽，彷佛春天还未走远。贵族子弟都喜欢留在这里，王维也喜欢这里的美景。于是，他诗性大发，提笔写下一首诗《山居秋暝》。
Lotus China elementary school 2 grade grandson graceful of the stem of a herb
莲华小学二年级孙莛婷
The high mountain that does not have one person for nothing just issued a spit, everythings on earth becomes more settleclear clear is relaxed. An autumn wind has been blown, the leaf falls to give out the sound of “ rustle ” , it is it told me the autumn came.
空无一人的高山刚下了一场小雨，万物都变得更加澄澈清爽。一阵秋风吹过，树叶落下发出“簌簌”的声音，是它告诉了我秋天到来了。
The moon is shining that holds out standing pine like Na Yupan, ased if to drape a white and hazy gauze garment to pine, can't help letting me gasp in admiration. Clear river water from the past flowed above stone, played bite babble the composition of Dong, can't help letting a person be intoxicated in this wonderful sound.
那玉盘似的月亮照耀着那挺立着的青松，仿佛给松树披上了一层洁白朦胧的纱衣，不禁让我赞叹。清澈的河水从石头上面流了过去，奏响了叮叮咚咚的乐曲，不禁让人陶醉这美妙的声音中。
Suddenly Zhu Lin transmits a Bacchic sound, it is the girl that washs the dress so people came back. Qing Qing's lotus leaf and pink lotus are moved suddenly, it is the fisherman that fish was taking a boat to come back so. See there is a fish on fisher only, the fisherman is singing folk song aloud, what there is a bumper harvest on the face is happy.
忽然竹林传来一阵阵喧闹声，原来是洗衣服的女孩子们回来了。青青的荷叶和粉红色的莲花忽然动了一动，原来是打鱼的渔民坐着小船回来了。只见渔船上满载着鱼儿，渔民大声唱着山歌，脸上洋溢着丰收的喜悦。
Although spring had gone, but the scenery here still very beautiful, as if spring has not left. Aristocratic children people like here very much. Pen of king dimension brandish wrote down a small poem: " Shan Juqiu sets " ——
春天虽然已经过去了，但这里的景色依然很美，仿佛春天还没有离去。贵族子弟们都很喜欢这里。王维挥笔写下了一首小诗：《山居秋暝》——
Lotus China elementary school of Xin of 2 grade king
莲华小学二年级王歆湉
Do not have the big hill of one person for nothing, after just issueing a fine drizzle, become cool all the more. The autumn came, big hill becomes multicoloured, with respect to beautiful like picture scroll.
空无一人的大山，刚下完一场蒙蒙细雨后，变得格外凉爽。秋天来了，大山变得五颜六色，就像一幅美丽的画卷。
The bright moon is illuminated gently on pine to resemble a frost, clear the Qing Quan that sees an end from the “ on stone ” has flowed, sound resembles a song, pleasant all the more in noiseless mountain forest.
明月轻柔地照在松树上就像一层霜，清澈见底的清泉从石头上“哗啦啦哗啦啦”流过，声音就像一首歌，在寂静的山林中格外动听。
Zhu Lin becomes Bacchic suddenly rose, transmit a song, it is the girl that wash clothes came back so. Graceful lotus leaf lotus parts to both sides, a fisher came back. The fisherman was hit fat fat fish, they are singing a song happily!
竹林忽然变得喧闹起来了，传来一阵阵歌曲，原来是洗衣的姑娘回来了。亭亭玉立的荷叶荷花向两边分开，一条条渔船回来了。渔民打到了又肥又胖的鱼，他们开心地唱着歌呢！
Although spring had gone, but the scenery here however still very beautiful, pear Hua Xinghua still has peach blossom to blooming here, as if spring had not left. Aristocratic descendants people feel here is too beautiful, want to live here fall. Wang Wei also likes the beautiful scenery of rim plain very much, his brandish pen wrote down —— of a poem " Shan Juqiu sets " :
春天虽然已经过去了，但是这里的景色却依然很美，这里梨花杏花还有桃花都盛开着，仿佛春还没有离去。贵族的子孙们都觉得这里太美丽了，都想在这里住下呢。王维也很喜欢辋川的美景，他挥笔写下了一首诗——《山居秋暝》：