Before, it is a big woods, lush and green, cliff is on the side. Right, barren island is here. Etc, my friend Zhu Yu but?
眼前，是一片大树林，郁郁葱葱的，旁边是悬崖峭壁。没错，这儿是荒岛。等等，我的朋友朱雨可呢？
Not long ago, I and my friend, the father that still has him comes out together amuse oneself, result boat went aground.
不久前，我和我朋友，还有他的爸爸一起出来游玩，结果船搁浅了。
I stood, crying aloud: “ Zhu Laoke! Zhu Laoke! Are you in? The barren island echo with deserted ” is worn my sound. Saw him eventually, he is gotten out from a woods, cry: “ you woke! ”“ fastens gibberish, where is your pa? ” I am busy ask. Zhu Yu but old father is a seasoned explorer. He is collecting “ bavin, we go looking for a few fruits! ” my glibly agrees.
我站了起来，大声喊着：“朱老可！朱老可！你在哪？”空荡荡的荒岛回响着我的声音。终于看见了他，他从一片树林里钻出来，喊道：“你醒了！”“别废话，你爸呢？”我忙问。朱雨可的老爸是一个经验丰富的探险家。“他在捡柴，我们去找一些水果吧！”我满口答应。
We go on the cliff in front forward, see Zhu Yu can take out a pocket knife from inside knapsack only, take out a pocket knife from inside my knapsack again, in getting stuck to be seamed in cliff, card goes up. He climbed the peak slowly, cultivate greatly with cord ring, drop again will let me be mounted. My one pace upgrade climbs, stone falls to roll full marks suddenly when climbing a half / come down, my face about is escaped. “ within an inch of is explained in this ponder in ” my heart, the heart also can'ts help insecurity rises.
我们朝着前面的山崖上去，只见朱雨可从背包中拿出小刀，又从我的背包中拿出小刀，卡在崖缝中，一下一下卡上去。他慢慢爬到了山顶上，用绳子套住大树，再丢下来让我爬上去。我一步一步往上爬，爬到一半的时候突然落石滚满分/下来，我一个转身躲过。“差点就交代在这了”我心里暗想，内心也不由得紧张起来。
Arrived the summit, the watermelon of round billow appeared actually on the ground, fragile the attention that green watermelon drew me. This ghost place has a fruit actually, really “ escapes from death, ” of the blessing after having surely. When I should be being picked, see only on the side ground of eye covetously of a boar is staring at me, I cry, offend it however wool. It bumps to me directly come, I dodge not as good as, was about to be bumped into soon. Abrupt, that pig screams, fell to come down. Fix eyes on looks, the back that sees that pig only became much a deep knife wound, it is Zhu Yu so but father saved me.
到了山顶，地上竟然出现了圆滚滚的西瓜，脆绿的西瓜吸引了我的注意。这鬼地方竟然有水果，真是“大难不死，必有后福”。我正要去摘时，只见旁边有一头野猪虎视眈眈地盯着我，我大叫一声，却把它惹毛了。它直接向我撞来，我躲闪不及，眼看就要被撞了。突然，那头猪惨叫一声，倒了下来。定睛一看，只见那猪的背部多了一道深深的刀伤，原来是朱雨可的爸爸救了我。
Gather food, I offer: “ day is fast black, place firewood into the appearance of SOS, ignite firewood, should meet somebody discovers. ” Zhu Yu can leave at once place, ignited firewood next, eventually somebody saved us.
收集完食物，我提议到：“天快黑了，将柴火摆成SOS的形状，点燃木柴，应该会有人发现。”朱雨可连忙开摆，然后点燃了木柴，终于有人救了我们。
This expeditionary brigade is too wonderful really, I come here even after expeditionary.
这次探险之旅真是太奇妙了，以后我还要来这里探险。(文/刘斌阳)