Before you can say Jack Robinson, my little sister already 3 years old, speak of this my little sister, that can be ghost of a make trouble really, your look, she begins to be in again act wildly against law and public opinion. . . . . . .
转眼间，我的妹妹已经3岁了，说起我的这个妹妹，那可真是一个捣蛋鬼，你瞧，她又开始在胡作非为了.......
See she is taking feeding bottle single-handed only, squeeze at the same time, wash at the same time sing at the same time: “ is washed ah wash ah bathing bath, everybody leaves to bathe quickly milk asperses bath ……”“ ” on sofa entirely, washed a ” of delighted “ milk bath to sofa. “ does not want! I call ” aloud, when saying late, fast in those days, sofa has been irrigated to appear by her, I am quarrelsome, one has seized her feeder, pointing to her to say: “ you a make trouble ghost, that is the sofa mat that the grandma just washed yesterday in those days, see father come back not to hit your buttock to just be blamed. ” whose Ceng Cheng thinks, this is small girl spits a tongue to say to me actually: I am in “ to bathe to sofa, do not disturb me! "Ground of my have no alternative sighed tone say: “ hey! The make trouble ghost that you are a be worthy of the name really ah ” !来源 wwW.ZUowEnbA.nET
只见她一手拿着奶瓶，一边挤，一边洗一边唱：“洗呀洗呀洗澡澡，大家开快来洗澡澡……”“哗啦”一声牛奶全部洒在了沙发上，给沙发洗了一个痛快的“牛奶浴”。“不要啊！”我大声喊道，说时迟，那时快，沙发已经被她浇透，我怒气冲冲，一把夺过她的奶瓶，指着她说：“你个捣蛋鬼，那时那是奶奶昨天刚洗的沙发垫，看爸爸回来不打你屁股才怪。”谁曾成想，这小妮子竟然向我吐了吐舌头说：“我在给沙发洗澡呢，不要打扰我!"我无可奈何地叹了口气说道：“哎！你真是一个名副其实的捣蛋鬼呀”！
Remember still having a thing that allows me to be between tears and smiles, which days that day, who is knowing in the fasten on downstair tree a chicken, the little sister saw, run over at once, look at east, look on the west, I think she goes seeing chicken, did not pay attention to her, which Ceng Cheng thinks, she actually the cord unlock fasten chicken, chicken
记得还有一件让我啼笑皆非的事情，哪天那天，不知是谁在楼下的树上拴了一只鸡，妹妹看见了，连忙跑过去，东瞅瞅，西看看，我以为她去看鸡，便没有理会她，哪曾成想，她竟然把拴鸡的绳子解开了，鸡
“ whizs ” ground, into thin air, I see in a wretched state this, go up at once ask her: “ how do you put the chicken of others ran, know to run where? ” sees a little sister cry greatly only, her clear has pity on ground say: “ chicken is very pitiful, it wants to seek her mother. ” my heart was touched at a draught, the little sister is an extremely kind-hearted child really, fortunately I went around whole village, find this chicken in an ordinary corner eventually, and it new fasten is good.
“嗖”地一下，便无影无踪了，我一看这下糟了，连忙上去问她：“你怎么把别人的鸡放跑了，知道跑哪儿了吗？”只见妹妹哇的一声大哭起来，她楚楚可怜地说道：“鸡好可怜，它想去找***妈。”我的心一下子被感动了，妹妹真是一个无比善良的孩子，好在我跑遍了整个小区，终于在一个不起眼的角落里找到这只鸡，并把它重新拴好了。
This is my little sister, although she is piquant make trouble, but a person's mind is very kind-hearted however, I love my little sister, because have so clever and bright little sister,be, our home just can have so much joy!
这就是我的妹妹，虽然她调皮捣蛋，但心地却十分善良，我爱我的妹妹，正是因为有这样聪明伶俐的妹妹，我们家才会有那么多的欢乐！
A literary works is minor the author comes from two respects depict little sister, it is a little sister piquant, 2 it is goodness of little sister a person's mind, and shaped image of this one character respectively through two things, it is the little sister washs milk bath to sofa, 2 it is little sister unlock the chicken that fasten wears, what two things choose is very typical, left deep impression to the reader, model very successfully. Begin part used the 2nd person, pull close with the distance between the reader, attract a reader to read interest, terminal point chooses theme of chapter of proclaimed in writing again, generalize figure figure, make the article looks more compact, very pretty good! The article should notice wrongly written or mispronounced characters in the process of writing, this kind of small error lets an article easily buckle cent a lot of, want later attentive!
本篇文章小作者从两方面来刻画妹妹，一是妹妹调皮，二是妹妹心地善良，并且通过两件事分别塑造了这一人物形象，一是妹妹给沙发洗牛奶浴，二是妹妹解开了拴着的鸡，两件事情选的很典型，都给读者留下了深刻的印象，塑造得很成功。开头部分运用了第二人称，拉近了和读者之间的距离，吸引读者阅读兴趣，结尾处再次点明文章主题，概括人物形象，使文章看起来更紧凑，很不错！文章在写作的过程中要注意错别字，这种小失误容易让文章扣分很多，以后要细心了！