I and father catch small tadpole together. A of a dense mass of in the river water that I just saw Qing Dynasty is clear to the side of the river, wow, a lot of small tadpole! Their head circle is round, the tail is long long, resemble each greatly comma, extremely lovely. Father makes I and him same put the hand into water to be close to slowly, small tadpole swims in the control of I and father. Differ meeting I and father caught a lot of small tadpole, father helps install them in bottle of a glass, we came home happily.
我和爸爸一起去河边捉小蝌蚪。我刚到河边就看到清清的河水里黑压压的一片，哇，好多小蝌蚪呀！它们的头圆圆的，尾巴长长的，就像一个个大大的逗号，可爱极了。爸爸让我和他一样将手慢慢地放进水里接近，小蝌蚪就游到了我和爸爸的手心里。不一会我和爸爸就捉到了许多小蝌蚪，爸爸帮忙把它们装在一个玻璃瓶子里，我们就开开心心地回家了。
Arrived midday, when we have a meal, I remembered small tadpole is hungry also, I the composition the steamed bread breaks each to be put small pieces in bottle, small tadpole people rapid ground swims to be being contended for eat.
到了中午，我们吃饭的时候，我想起了小蝌蚪是不是也饿了，我就把馒头掰成一个个小块放到瓶子里，小蝌蚪们就飞快地游过来争着吃。
Classes are over afternoon I just arrived home, abandon satchel to see those " small lovely " people, who knows them to float entirely motionless on surface, do I ask mom small tadpole people how? Mom says the steamed bread puts the likelihood too much to give them be maintained dead, I listened to cry sadly.
下午放学我刚到家，扔下书包就去看那些“小可爱”们，谁知它们全部都漂在水面上一动不动，我问妈妈小蝌蚪们怎么了？妈妈说可能馒头放得太多把它们给撑死了，我听了伤心的哭了起来。