Autumn wind sends bright, melon and fruit waves sweet. As seasonal change, we are brought up gradually, the teacher's loving-kindness also precipitates gradually in our sky, face teacher, we can want uncontrollably to eulogize, more the feeling in wanting to convey a heart. Up-to-date, still how many teacher twinkles in your heart sky! Let us be searched in our sky piece most a that when twinkle!
秋风送爽，瓜果飘香。随着季节的变更，我们在逐渐长大，老师的恩情也渐渐地在我们的星空中沉淀，面对恩师，我们会情不自禁地想要歌颂，更想要表达心中的感情。直到现在，还有多少位恩师在你的心空中闪烁！就让我们在自己的星空中寻找出最闪烁的那一颗吧！
In my sky, most one that when twinkle is dear yellow teacher. She is having a pitch-black bingle, the eye of spirit of fresh and juicy, she what a piece of glib small mouth …… likes to wear high-heeled shoes but beautiful, you are seeing, also meet certainly so feel! Why is knowing Mr. Huang most a that when twinkle? Because of her church I a lot of knowledge, write a composition especially, since went up 5 grade (classmaster is Mr. Huang) , my composition can write a composition force promoted a lot of, she teachs me how to had written an article, why to write can better …… so she had never complained, always teach us patiently! From this, her church my a lot of knowledge that do not know before! And, she still is my intimate elder sister, often help me solve the problem in a few lives, give me the consideration of meticulously.
在我的星空中，最闪烁的那一颗就是亲爱的黄老师。她有着一头乌黑的短发，水灵灵的眼睛，一张能说会道的小嘴……喜欢穿高跟鞋的她可漂亮了，你见着了，一定也会这么觉得！知道黄老师为什么是最闪烁的那一颗吗？因为她教会了我很多知识，尤其是作文，自从上了五年级（班主任是黄老师），我的作文能作文力就提升了许多，她教我如何写好一篇文章，为什么这样写会比较好……她从来都没有抱怨过，总是耐心地教我们！由此，她教会了我很多以前不知道的知识！而且，她还是我的知心姐姐，常常帮我解决一些生活中的问题，给予我无微不至的关怀。
I am written down very clearly, when 5 grade, I and friend make a noise because of a bit bagatelle so that cannot leave to hand in actually. At this moment, ground of cudgel one's brains for of elder sister of her —— intimate is our unlock ” of knot of this “ heart, make I and friend again become reconciled! After, I and friend can look for her to see psychological written guarantee from time to time!
我记得很清楚，在五年级时，我和朋友竟然因为一点小事而吵得不可开交。这时，她——知心姐姐绞尽脑汁地为我们解开了这个“心结”，使我和朋友再次和好！以后，我和朋友会时不时地去找她解心理之结！
This is that most twinkling star, a that when I cannot forget forever. So here I should say: Mr. “ , thank your arduous fatigue to make, you worked hard! ”
这就是那一颗最闪烁的星，我永远忘不了的那一颗。所以这里我要说：“老师，谢谢您的辛勤劳作，您辛苦了！”(文/骆妃婷)