Our motherland is in found a state subsequent very big change, e.g. the train, rate is very slow before the train, its color has a plenty of green, have a plenty of red. Want more than two days to Beijing from Nanjing before, there was Gao Tie now, rate is much rapidder, want 3 hours only, mom is away on official business go to Beijing, want to just can be answered the following day before, can come back in the evening that day now.
我们的祖国在建国以后发生了很大的变化，比如说火车，火车以前速度很慢的，它的颜色有的是绿色，有的是红色。以前从南京到北京要两天多，现在有了高铁，速度就快多了，只要三个小时，妈妈出差去北京，以前要第二天才能回，现在当天晚上就能回来了。
When having, I have operation, but should take a train again, I also can write line of business on the train only. Write line of business carefully very hard on the train before, contrary now, on the train very smooth, can very serious ground writes line of business.
有的时候，我有作业，但是又要坐火车，我也只能在火车上写作业了。以前在火车上很难认真、仔细地写作业，现在就相反了，火车上很平稳，可以很认真地写作业了。
The environment on the train is very good now, small green car is so dirty before unlike, ascensive composition is the biggest is toilet, because be in before train pull in when, cannot go up toilet, otherwise make water can flow to the ground, very smelly. Uric make water can have a large bag now, make water is sucked, won't smelly.
现在火车上的环境很好，不像以前小绿车那么脏，进步作文最大的是卫生间，因为以前在火车进站的时候，不能上厕所，不然尿会流到地上，很臭。现在尿的尿会有一个大的袋子，尿都吸进去，就不会臭了。
The Gao Tie of our China is special ground fast, but still have faster than Gao Tie is train of magnetism in suspension, its speed is Gao Tie is decuple, it is in Shanghai the airport arrives between the railway station, in all 30 kilometers are long, although train of magnetism in suspension compares tall iron,should get quickly much, but cost is expensive, so other country still uses the Gao Tie of our country.
我们中国的高铁是非常地快，但是还有一个比高铁更快的是磁悬浮列车，它的速度是高铁的十倍，它是在上海飞机场到火车站之间，共30公里长，虽然磁悬浮列车比高铁要快得多，可是造价贵，所以别的国家还是用我们国家的高铁。
Gao Tie buys a ticket now very convenient also, buy a ticket to want to discharge very long line before, buy a ticket very quickly on the mobile phone now.
现在高铁买票也很方便，以前买票要排很长的队，现在在手机上很快就买到票。
The progress of the motherland is really great!
祖国的发展真大呀！(文/周安馨)