Sincere letter, with respect to sweet like orange, add flavor to the life; Sincere letter, resemble a ship, take you to open by Yuan Hang ……
诚信，就像一颗蜜桔，给生活增添滋味；诚信，就像一艘轮船，带你启乘远航……
A day of in relief bright fawn on, mom gave me 40 yuan buy writing material. My excited ground runnings to stationer, the boss is liquidating the goods that just arrived at that time, the thing in stationer makes me dazzling, do not know this choosing which. I took a 10 yuan a stiff-haired writing brush and a 6 yuan rubber from which, when as a result I pay, the boss looked for me 30 yuan, I took money to go. On the way home, I keep wandering on the road, think in the heart: If changing, the boss can scold me; If be not being changed, mom of stepmother coming home also can scold my dishonesty. I thought again, finally, still be toughen one's scalp-brace oneself walked along stationer.来自 zUOwENbA.net
阳光明媚的一天，妈妈给了我40元买文具。我激动的地跑到文具店，当时老板在整理刚到的货物，文具店里的东西让我眼花缭乱，不知道该选哪个。我从中来拿了一支10元的水笔和一个6元的橡皮，结果我去付钱的时候老板找了我30元，我拿起钱走了出去。在回家的路上，我不停地在路上徘徊，心里想：换的话，老板会不会骂我；不换的话，回家后妈妈也会骂我不诚实。我想了又想，最后，还是硬着头皮走回了文具店。
My in fear and trembling says very feel sorrily again: “ hello, uncle, I am sorry, I cheated you. ” boss looks at me questioningly and ask: Why should “ say to I am sorry? Ground of ” my be nervous says: You look for “ more my money, do not plan to say originally, think later or should tell you. Should want to do a honesty provoking favorite child. One face says ” boss gratifiedly: “ is irrespective, honesty is gold. The boss gave ” my key later buckle as award.
我忐忑不安又十分抱歉地说：“你好，叔叔，对不起，我骗了你。”老板疑惑地看着我并问：“为什么要说对不起？”我提心吊胆地说：“您多找我钱了，原本不打算说，后来想一想还是应该告诉你。应该要做一个诚实又惹人喜欢的孩子。”老板一脸欣慰的说：“没关系，诚实是金。”后来老板给了我一个钥匙扣作为奖励。
On the road that go back, this one big stone in my heart eventually be born.
回去的路上，我心里这一块大石头终于落地了。
This one thing let me know: Honesty is very commendable, honesty is a kind of good moral character more. Honest, the life that lets me is better.
这一件事让我知道了：诚实是很可贵的，诚实更是一种美好的品德。诚实，让我的生活更美好。
Author: Cao Shuqin
作者：曹舒勤
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Directive teacher: Yu Jiao
指导老师：俞佼